Maître Peintre‏

Maître Peintre‏

A Poem by Frieda P
"

~Master painter...

"

Hpainted me of Chantilly lace
      and dark cherry liqueur,
  gently touch'd upon the curvature
                   of my breast
sable brush dipping every nuance,
    wildflowers tucked  away at the nape of my neck
               as silky zephyr's swept through my hair

I trembled in quivering anticipation
              whilst he stroked with flair'd intensity,
my cheeks color'd
                        an Alla Prima rosy glow,
    skin the shade of alabaster Romanticism
                  eyes like jeweled orbs of dark umber adoration

     piece de resistance, 
                  alas my master painter
                     with bliss'd feathery fibers 

         etched my muse's essence,
composed the heart
                in divine golden flax
            forever entwining the desirous 
                            melodies of our soul



© 2014 Frieda P



Author's Note

Frieda P
Artwork ~ Herbert James Draper


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Featured Review

This is one of the most romantic tales you have penned. It is sultry and sensual with a depth of definition just like an oil painting. I have said before you write like a great master and you do. Your pigment is the colourful metaphor and the expressive word.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You've truly humbled me with your kind words John, took my breath away actually, thanks so much.
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

As they say, 'you are worth it' my Lady.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I'm tickled, you have the featured review, grazie mille again John.



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Now T H I S is what I call P O E T R Y! You blow me away with each and every poem, Mama F -- You are beyond amazing. Each and every word/line just knocked the words right out of my gob! I think I may be somewhere in the U.S.A...

A big OOOFT! xoxo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oooft, that's what I call a review! Thanks noodlebumble. :) xo
maitre peintre written by maitre poete. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Awh, you've touched my poetic heart Shubhangi. :)
Just as the master painter can do all this, so can the master poet. Frieda, I do believe this is one of your best writes. The romance is enchanting, the metaphor is charming, and the vocabulary choice is superb. Perhaps YOUR piece de resistance! Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Wow thanks so much Lydikey, means a lot coming from you. You've humbled me my sweet joisey friend. :.. read more
wildflowers tucked away at the nape of my neck

as silky zephyr's swept through my hair

melodies of our soul



the Soul feels more then most know
it is sensitive to so much emotion and feeling
it tis a beautiful thing.


I don't get sick much but my
sinus are acting up and have
a annoying Headache feeling MEH.


I had to take a peek at this Lovely
little painting I may get Inspired later
never know.


I am going to watch a movie I think or lay down
some more just relax.


Blessings. kindred poet


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Kindred Poet, hope you feel better by now....
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

I am doing better am still coughing just not as much. thank you. it's a pleasure my friend. you'r.. read more
Beauty captured and held, magnifies its presence in the world. There is a feeling of erotic overlay in this, as there is the image of the beautiful woman, then the erotic scene of her being painted and then your descriptions, quite rich!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for this glowing review Leigh!
Mater Painter --- the brush strokes of this rather whimsical verse...and the language get a few bonus points also...takes the reader in --- with each stage this comes forth...and you give him his own lines:

alas my master painter
with bliss'd feathery fibers

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an added touch there and continue to finish what he starts to the very end...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You're such a complainer, god bless your wife... ;)
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

She's my opposite...I'm a writer and she's an accountant...so that's a good thing...I like letters a.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

That's what they claim, my CPA bit the dust...
Beatiful writing as always, Frieda! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Danny, jazz'd you enjoyed. :)
I would be lying, if I didn`t have a flashback from reading this poem. This poem made me reminisce in a time where I wasn`t ashamed to feel vulnerable unto a suitor and now I ask myself: was it really worthet? Was it a fairytale? I was a complete lesbian before I was intelligently attracted to the man I`m with now and the feelings that are described in this poem, I realize were only primal.

Exquisite write. :) K

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kleio13

3 Years Ago

Nah it isn`t . It`s a test. We`re all experimentation
Kleio13

3 Years Ago

Only the strong survive
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Yep, us butterfly warriors, one step in front of the other.....
Wow I am breathless... this was a masterpiece and the cover of this move was perfect for the artwork displayed. I enjoyed the movie as well it is one of my favorites. You have captured the essence of unconditional love...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyAnn68

3 Years Ago

Tomorrow is my final exam and today Ia min hysteria mode...but I am positive I will pass this if I j.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Good luck with your exams...and the move! x
LadyAnn68

3 Years Ago

Thanks....
My apology for the time it took me to get to this. You've painted a eloquent scene of passions, warmth, and sensuality, very enjoyable.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Jack, much appreciated.

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