...the universe chuckles

just a quick scribble

based on lies of conceptualizing

or in basic truths of ambiguity

fact is still stranger than fiction

upside down psychological demands

conjures an inside out reality

the universe vehemently chuckles....

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You're not capable of 'scribbles' Mrs.R, and that fact that this is 'quick' is thoroughly humbling...to paraphrase an already-used expression, you have more profoundness in your pinky than I could ever lay claim to...I am not worthy ;) x Btw, I was going to say 'profundity' but...nah, that's too big a word for today haha

[Frieda P]

Oh you haven't been in the vault, it's full of all kinds of ridiculous nonsense, luckily I'm still semi-sane enough to know better not to post it. ;) Ha....thanks hon, I needed a chuckle. x

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm serious love...and trust me, I could say the same about my vault, that's why you don't see much of it ;) x

[J. K. Beach]

Wow! You sure pack a lot of wallop in a small space, Frieda... Each line intertwines with the next in such beautiful ways. Small scribbles often speak louder than elegies and long laments. See, here I have already written more words than those that can be numbered in your poem, and yet I have said nothing. Your work always speaks to me my friend. Beautiful words...excellent work!

[Matching Socks]

Ooh I missed this one yesterday?
Nice little deep scribble.
Xx

[Rita L. Sev]

The Universe laughs because we are so dense, and we listen to mere people instead of Her wisdom...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the universe has to look at us and laugh...how could it not...we lie to others and ourselves...and truth gets to be so ambiguous we just can't even define it anymore.

[Frieda P]

I think it laughs behind our back each & every day, no doubt...thanks jacob.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is such a truthful write...fantasy does, indeed stem from psychological desires...very deep and enjoyable little poem

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Cascara....