Poetic flip Senryu

Poetic flip Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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~for April...

"
dıןɟ �"ıʇǝod ɐ

ʇɐɥʇ ʇnoqɐ buıppıʞ ʇ,usɐʍ

uʍop ǝpısdn buı�"uɐ




dancing upside down

wasn't kidding about that

a poetic flip

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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And this is where imagination and inspiration overrule logic and determinism. The mirror image is very clever and also part of the concept and the part where the sentence becomes personified it is also very creative. Frieda you are on fire (creatively speaking).

Someone better call one of the chipp - n - dales on a fireman costume.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha, thanks Rene, April lit a match under my arse...it just wrote itself! :) My son is a firefighter.. read more



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This was very clever. It's like that picture quote that says you looking funny reading that. I will admit, my iPhone was upside down and side to side. Guess with the few glasses of vino I've had I got no chance!

Cute little poem, Frieda.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was cute and clever. I must admit, I tried to read the upside down version first and failed miserably!

Posted 9 Years Ago


That sounds like a lot of fun. With a metal ceiling and magnetic shoes, I suppose it could really be done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love the originality in this one. :-)
I must have missed the post.
The poetic flip, will that's clever in itself, I think I interpret that as meaning the our poems either by accident or design can be interpreted positively, negatively, happy, sad... Just depends on the reader.
Image is fantabulous.
:-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

When in doubt, go with basic black, yep. :)
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Traditional, classic. Goes with everything. :-)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Yes, you're very posh dahlin' :)
a witty and cleverly penned senryu... with the mirror image poetic flip side up...
a delightful read which I enjoyed

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks Fran Marie.
oh so very cool....and the song to go along with...

i like the mirrored image...

upside down or right side up, we are still dancing.

and we should try to keep dancing even when our world is turned upside down.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

We must keep on dancing at all costs, right jacob, thanks so much...
And this is where imagination and inspiration overrule logic and determinism. The mirror image is very clever and also part of the concept and the part where the sentence becomes personified it is also very creative. Frieda you are on fire (creatively speaking).

Someone better call one of the chipp - n - dales on a fireman costume.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha, thanks Rene, April lit a match under my arse...it just wrote itself! :) My son is a firefighter.. read more
Well, this is entertaining. Is there some reason, why, when it flipped, the letters were replaced by " marks?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

only fair.. serves you RIGHT... :P
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Must be the site doing that, it shows up correct when it's posted....

...and you be qui.. read more
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

hey!! pfffft... fine.. I shall go back to my errrr.. corner... :P
Hahaha that is hilarious.What the heck are you and April up to ?Whatever, it makes for entertaining my pazzo a*s lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha was just having a bit o'fun.... ;) Grazie....
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

True that .I love you feisty,sassy gals :)
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome chica :)
LMAO... ok... you win... you got me... HA...HA.... you are such a hoot!!! oh my goodness girl.. what am I going to do with you ma'am.... You almost made me spit out my coffee at my dang computer.. I so adore you... YOU WIN... (this time).... :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I'm at work, can't get all 'worked' up...haha
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

ahhh, yes.. I have made you be naughty enough at work, I suppose.. free pass for now... :)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You're too good to me......... :)

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Added on July 20, 2014
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Tags: Senryu, flip, poetry, dancing, ceiling, upside down, silly

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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