Exhale Poetry II

For Lee ♥

Butterfly haunts me
   flutters in the darkest of night
when the smoke dismally cleared
    all that was left was a still photograph
no breath to be had, no words to be spoken
   perched upon my affection where no one can see,
         all the secrets that taunt my scarred soul 

          our story's final chapter closed too soon

Left behind in your spirit reminisces 
   like an erratic zephyr, they twist my mind
     nothing sacred in how you fled the atmosphere
I oft wonder have you found destiny's redemption
     as you floated aimlessly from this earth
etching markings on a sky of colorless clues

surrendering only in my dream's illusions
     still tracing the dusky painted haze

                          all that's left is to exhale poetry 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Seriously hurts my heart to read this, Frieda...

It's the pain that flows through the vein of your poetry, which I find the most endearing...

"I oft wonder have you found destiny's redemption
as you floated aimlessly from this earth
etching markings on a sky of colorless clues

surrendering only in my dream's illusions
still tracing the dusky painted haze

all that's left is to exhale poetry "~ This moved me to the very core...

Stunning....~xoxo~

[Frieda P]

Seriously hurt to write this one my sweet friend, thanks so much for your continued support and friendship always dear Robbie. xoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You'll always have my support and friendship, sweet gypsy Butterfly...~xoxo~

[Frieda P]

You put a huge smile on my heart sweet Robbie. ♥

[Robbie~xoxo~]

(((hugs)))~xoxo~:)

[Sarai Lee]

"etching markings on a sky of colorless clues

surrendering only in my dream's illusions
still tracing the dusky painted haze

all that's left is to exhale poetry "

Your wording here is fantastic. You can feel the loss and the reaching. You have a wonderful way with phrases, and I'm always enamored with how well you express these emotions. I hope poetry continues to help you transcend, my friend. Keep writing, and thank you for sharing!

[NoelHC]

Sad and loving, you express your loss well here.

[Einstein Noodle]

i have been waiting for this tribute Freida ..you have seemed distracted lately ;) it is beautiful in its sadness and wonderings .. i seriously hope you can feel our arms hugging ... love to you Freida!
:(
E.

[Troy Henson]

This one touched me Frieda....really got to me. The loss of someone so close has a pain to it all of it's own. The memories will serve you so well my dear and may you smile again soon. My heart is with you.

Troy

[Cassie]

This is really sad Freida, Jeez...you made me tear..may your sister sleep well...This really hurts and I feel you...

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Moving sentiments and well expressed emotions. very nice poetry. Loved it.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I sm blinking back my tears as i am typing.The pain and emptiness of it will never go ,but yes that memories spent together will be forvever cherished.The sorrow through which you've gone makes you an unique poet- how you pour down your feelings in a blank paper.. Everlasting pain will give birth to heartfelt poetry.. the
Question which haunts you- is she redeemed??.. but take heart Freida ★ takecare amiga★ xoxo

~Sophy

[Sophy Freebirds]

I sm blinking back my tears as i am typing.The pain and emptiness of it will never go ,but yes that memories spent together will be forvever cherished.The sorrow through which you've gone makes you an unique poet- how you pour down your feelings in a blank paper.. Everlasting pain will give birth to heartfelt poetry.. the
Question which haunts you- is she redeemed??.. but take heart Freida ★ takecare amiga★ xoxo

~Sophy

[Mayank]

It is a tragic rage, after a smoke is cleared you realize you are chasing butterfly, and when you are close to them they just turn out to be an illusion.

[Avinash]

The constant pain will be the eternal beautiful ink to your writes. Destiny choses writers like you.