~Idiom's crow buffet

~Idiom's crow buffet

A Poem by Frieda P
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scribbles on a soiled napkin...literally

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voracious appetite in its assumption
   gestating, uninvited speaker regurgitated, 
    whilst cauterizing a choice seared stake 
           of animosity's craved consumption
dining on unseasoned crow served best cold
    on  sharp nebulous beds of aged idiosyncratic beliefs
served with a side of prickly ground idealism,
     sat at the head of a bottomless stoned table
          choking on insatiable erstwhile conclusions,
gutted screwing the noncompliant pooch 
    living in explicit glass houses,
           eating humble, pragmatic pie 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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This diet is good for the attitude just when one is about to get too comfortable there is that which wakes you up again and for the good or the bad it make you stand and think. I like the way that dinner has been served here however as I am a stric diet I will wait and just drink for a while.

A sobering moment

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Good idea Rene, cheers!



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Very nice little scribble on a napkin. I'm hungry. :)
But I'll just have a salad.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I'm having salad too. :)
this was something extraordinary.......looked for dictionary first..haha......but something really unique and amazingly written.......


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much anne, I get crazy when I rant....don't you just love to learn new words, I know I do... read more
anne

9 Years Ago

I can see that......every new word is like a new experience to me.....I do love that..... :)
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MAC
wait, review to follow, need to grab my dictionary first LOL

Frieda, can anybody in the world do poetic sarcasm like you do?? I think not

you are an amazing writer but also an amazing thinker

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha laughing here, knock off the Prozac and get with the program Mark. :)
MAC

9 Years Ago

with friends like you I can't afford to get rid of the Prozac :)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha I see you put your funny knickers back on. ;P
Your sarcasm is biting as it is subtle. Wonderful write. I love the prickly ground idealism.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ah thank you KL, I take that as a grand compliment. :)
"There are estimated to be at least twenty-five thousand idiomatic expressions in the English language.[2]" from Wiki wiki

who are you talking to that brings this on ??? i am simply overwhelmed .. and who the hell are you talking about ??? i am mesmerized by each and every line .. just going to go float now ... in the nebulae of ether land :))
E.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Not sure how reliable Wiki is, the professor won't let it slide as a source, I'm sure there are more.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

very unreliable to be sure .. but its quick, easy an fun just the same .. ;)
E.
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Are you sure you're tawkin' bout Wiki now? ;) ha
This diet is good for the attitude just when one is about to get too comfortable there is that which wakes you up again and for the good or the bad it make you stand and think. I like the way that dinner has been served here however as I am a stric diet I will wait and just drink for a while.

A sobering moment

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Good idea Rene, cheers!
it sucks when we have to eat crow as the entrée and humble pie for dessert, doesn't it?

nicely said here my friend...

got my smile for the afternoon.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words jacob, always makes me day if I can give you a smile my friend.
Well know that is one raw meal you have scribbled up, one that the one being served needs to choke on to m=get the chefs point across.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

One can only hope, thanks Dale....

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