Dancing _ Ten word poem

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

Frieda!!!!! They say it's the weekend where funky, cherry eating dancing abounds .. they're wrong, it's a Monday morning setting that tone for the whole damn week .. WOW!! SHAZZZZZAMMM THANK YOU MA'AM!! If i didn't know better i think you are teasing me with a big cherry, funk-a-delic smile and in 10 words too ALI KAZZZZAAAAM! just saying ... you know of course that song will be playing and singing and..in this white boy's mind all week long ... I'm awake now Frieda .. MWAH xxoo

[Frieda P]

Jayus, if I knew I was gonna get that reaction, I would have delved into this ten word thing sooner!! ha...jazz'd you're groovin' white boy! Play that funky music Curt. Hope you're dancin' 'til you die. ;) Mwah! xo

[redzone]

You can get caught up in the music embedded in your poem. But really it's the poem, the loveliness of it, the feel that you can get swirl by it, and this with 10 words. May be silly to say, but the music and even picture don't capture all that is said with these few words. Poetry is indeed a force that can entice romantic rapture (using your word ) .... do you believe it is possible to fall in love with someone through their poetry??? That is an exciting idea i think ..

[Sean Allen]

I love graphics and simplicity in poetry. and this is pretty good. The music was prefect too, but for an old guy like me who's daughter was born in 1976 I was a bit, should I be watching this stuff anymore?

[Jon Roggie]

Sweet! Not the band, your words!

[KK]

I'd enjoy falling in love that way. I like

[Cassie]

And I get soaked in your poetry wishing I would not dry up...

[Woody]

oooo the power of poetry! the most potent of spells and sometimes aphrodisiacs.
love the funky music too.

[Frieda P]

Yep, all ya need is a bottle of vino and moonlight to go with, perfect. :) Thanks Woody....

[Rita L. Sev]

BEAUTIFUL - your words, the image, the style - enjoyed this happy little poem, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, you even made me appreciate unicorns again, well, almost. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this, it is beautiful.

[Frieda P]

I feel in love with you too. :) But your poetry is more like Mosh Pit haha....

[Lyn Anderson]

I like that. :)

[Frieda P]

Fell not feel, people are going to start to talk haha, and I knew you would ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, you can feel me anytime lol.:)

[Matching Socks]

Awesome!!
'Nuff said.....

[Frieda P]

True story :) Thanks Ana Sophia....

[Matching Socks]

Even better!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, yes, I can relate to this one! The words we read form a character study of the poet. Good one, Frieda. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Thanks Lydikey, you're speaking my language...