Vindictive Paradox  COLLABORATION w/KUBLAKHAN

Vindictive Paradox COLLABORATION w/KUBLAKHAN

A Poem by Frieda P
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your world crashed unto my ocean's depths
thrashing in wretched luminosity's mediocrity  
floundering to breathe in your obscenities,
objectionable metaphor's intended pity
greetings at irony's gate of inconclusive apathy,
hypocrisy's baptism in chanted pretense
wiped your feet on welcome's mockery mat, 
shut your own door as the house of cards played
a familiar sing-song of Pharisaism's pretended pious,
ace up the sleeve in blowhard's pontificating 
pretentious
poohed in double entendre's  denial 
fatalistic frippery of academic gloss
threatens to reveal stretch marks in your platitudes,
imbecilic renderings of verbal surreality

shoe size hardly fits your mouthpiece's blitz,
betray intentions of a p***y-whipped obviosity
mastery of bated self-stimulation started bolting
when the gag ball was bitten too hard on,
solitaire sighs pouts and twiddles its thumbs
in a bout of truculence awaiting the arrival
of a new deck to replace the one
whose kings and knaves are glued together,
cocky as the king of spades
when you force your own hand
cash in your chips at the door
when you call someone's bluff, 
one had better come up trumps
a few cards short of a dick,
there's always a joker in the pack
plastic-coated poster boy of free speech
in a world drowning in the bubbles
of misguided semen shot down,
in a quest for diction in direction
double meanings split like horny atoms
in a triple-X divorce
orgies of misogynistic linguistics, 
are just a left-handed mouse click away

unfairly arranged split strong suits

results in polyester cartooned burbles

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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ok, my cranky pants pulled up to my neck... "stupid people never "get over it" because "it" is stuck up their arse so far they can't see beyond their own egos... or is that "dongs", but I digress... er...

Ok you two "bad arse peoples" I think each lines points to his "master... fingers selfie" while dreaming for being "gods gift to , well, himself!!! cause noone else will have him, even as those well know seconds... Oh I can prettry cranky when my pants are drawn up to my neck...

Frieda, Steve, you rock and roll and this poem is sooooo damn irreverant that I heard this was why religion was invented.. here is just one (minor) example: "orgies of misogynistic linguistics,
are just a left-handed mouse click away
unfairly arranged split strong suits
results in polyester cartooned burbles" Hot Damn, nothing more to say.. end of story... I love the both of you MUCHLY which is hard to do with cranky pants on you know, so cut me a break for not reviewing this poem earlier...

lastly though, and in all seriousness... honest.... can I get a hollar lulla, praise da jesus with a "a few cards short of a dick,"... amen please!!! This last amen is for all the "D"heads who think they're intelligent... ~~~ red(hashiscrankyassvindictivepantson)zone




Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

If I could stop laughing I'd respond to this, your review is muchly more entertaining than the poem... read more
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

LOL You have officially cracked me up my friend....I'm really not sure how to follow that up except .. read more



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ok, my cranky pants pulled up to my neck... "stupid people never "get over it" because "it" is stuck up their arse so far they can't see beyond their own egos... or is that "dongs", but I digress... er...

Ok you two "bad arse peoples" I think each lines points to his "master... fingers selfie" while dreaming for being "gods gift to , well, himself!!! cause noone else will have him, even as those well know seconds... Oh I can prettry cranky when my pants are drawn up to my neck...

Frieda, Steve, you rock and roll and this poem is sooooo damn irreverant that I heard this was why religion was invented.. here is just one (minor) example: "orgies of misogynistic linguistics,
are just a left-handed mouse click away
unfairly arranged split strong suits
results in polyester cartooned burbles" Hot Damn, nothing more to say.. end of story... I love the both of you MUCHLY which is hard to do with cranky pants on you know, so cut me a break for not reviewing this poem earlier...

lastly though, and in all seriousness... honest.... can I get a hollar lulla, praise da jesus with a "a few cards short of a dick,"... amen please!!! This last amen is for all the "D"heads who think they're intelligent... ~~~ red(hashiscrankyassvindictivepantson)zone




Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

If I could stop laughing I'd respond to this, your review is muchly more entertaining than the poem... read more
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

LOL You have officially cracked me up my friend....I'm really not sure how to follow that up except .. read more
feisty cheeky rant in here, Ms. F. These lines amused me so much: "of misguided semen shot down,
in a quest for diction in direction".

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks gabrielle, but I can't take credit for that genius line...Kublakhan is your man, glad you enj.. read more
I love how, when I read something from you two, my head aches trying to figure out who is who. It's really smart, cheeky, and full of a sense of "F*ck it" and get on with your day. That's what you have to do most of the time, and just wing it, no matter how well you planned something, it usually falls apart and you just have to push off the shore and help yourself ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

After a while, I can't figure it out anymore either.....
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha That's one of the things we pride ourselves on KL ;)
I loved reading this one.....a super perfect write from two beautiful pens..... :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much anne, jazz'd you enjoyed our collaboration. :)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anne :)
God Almighty!!! as if I didn't have enough trouble wrapping my mind around your complicated verse! now you've gone and teamed up with another giant of the site.

ok this is very good (grudgingly)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Oh c'mon Woody, tongue in cheek, you got it....
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Thank you Woody :)
Woody

9 Years Ago

you're most welcome K :)
Well don't you two have the same bee in your collective bonnets lol.What an awesome rant full of passion and venom.Obviously there was no doubt I would like it look at the two who wrote it.Chica you and Steve write so seamlessly together.Great job as usual :) "a few cards short of a dick" Love this line lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Sigh one can hope :)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Thank you Vidya, let the mayhem commence...actually it looks like it already has an I missed it.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Lol stevie you came a little too late we already drank the cyber martinis lol
a few cards short of a what the? Seriously, that line made me laugh so hard. so much formidable sass and action in this piece. I'd love to hear it spoken - but I wonder if one could get through it without breaking character.
Its ferocious wordplay here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha I was wondering if everyone was just going to pass that up...figures it was you Tam! :)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Glad you enjoyed it TL, you can thank Frieda for the most clever line, I do :)
pretty powerful rant you two... wow.. few lines made me think, did they REALLY go there, and then giggled and thought, yes they did!!!... Holy jeez... added to the song and it sure was a knock out punch!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha you had to ask, you should know better by now girlfriend ;) Thanks muchly!
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Glad you enjoyed our little ode to irreverence my friend ;)
good work. Nice imagery here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks Laurie....
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Laurie
Look at you two, going all feisty on us again!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

We took our extra feisty pills that day. ;)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Yes, we were both having 'a day' ;)

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