Wild child Autumn

Wild child Autumn

A Poem by Frieda P
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bid adieu to summer's fire

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A twinkle in her eye,
   as autumn breezes whirl,
tumbling like popcorn nymphs twirling
    wild child frolics amidst colored skies,
              feels alive in falling rhymes
romps with playful butterflies
     zephyrs of golden ribbons lace the air
        crimson and tangerines hues,
crisp as a morning's dawning view
   cuddly sweater's warmth upon a hearth,
          dashed in a clash of a smile's sigh
bid a brisk adieu to sweet 
      summer's fiery summertide   



© 2014 Frieda P



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"The uploader has not made this video available in your country" Now I am intrigued by what music you chose for this highly appropriate poem. Sunday we were 77 F and sunny, Monday it was 32 F and we had 4 inches of snow. Totally skipped that "autumn breeze" thing.
Well written FP.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Wild Child by Enya...it was getting cool here at night, now it's back to muggy, gray, and hot. Than.. read more



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this is an exquisite little poem, Frieda. your word choice is absolutely delectable.

Posted 3 Years Ago


It's familiar. Is it an homage to Keats?

Posted 3 Years Ago


Frieda, I absolutely love this poem! These images make me eager for the chill in the air, the color-change of the leaves, sweaters and warm cider...

Posted 3 Years Ago


You have the most unique ways of describing the scene of your work…

tumbling like popcorn nymphs twirling
wild child frolics amidst colored skies

Love that, the whole poem is spectacular.

Posted 3 Years Ago


beautiful! simply beautiful....

Posted 3 Years Ago


We don't see much of Autumn here in Southern California (I keep waiting for those damn palm trees to turn colors...) Your poem paints a gorgeous picture of the changing season. Beautiful poetry lovely lady.

:) Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Though summer has retreated and finally receded for another year...do not dismay, for with autumn comes the mystic allure of change with hues of invigorating colour and transcendental aspirations !

A mosaic of colourful metaphor and intrigue Frieda !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh coach, your review is so poetic, thanks so much, love it!
Tom

3 Years Ago

Befitting of the subject matter Frieda !
What a beautiful peaceful read! The imagery was awesome! It painted a wonderful picture.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much imagination, jazz'd you enjoyed!
imagination101

3 Years Ago

My pleasure!
I like your word play in this poem, and the imagery brings the poem to life, makes me feel I'm in the great out doors as I read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one.
storiestotell

3 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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