Wild child Autumn

Wild child Autumn

A Poem by Frieda P
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bid adieu to summer's fire

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A twinkle in her eye,
   as autumn breezes whirl,
tumbling like popcorn nymphs twirling
    wild child frolics amidst colored skies,
              feels alive in falling rhymes
romps with playful butterflies
     zephyrs of golden ribbons lace the air
        crimson and tangerines hues,
crisp as a morning's dawning view
   cuddly sweater's warmth upon a hearth,
          dashed in a clash of a smile's sigh
bid a brisk adieu to sweet 
      summer's fiery summertide   



© 2014 Frieda P



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"The uploader has not made this video available in your country" Now I am intrigued by what music you chose for this highly appropriate poem. Sunday we were 77 F and sunny, Monday it was 32 F and we had 4 inches of snow. Totally skipped that "autumn breeze" thing.
Well written FP.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Wild Child by Enya...it was getting cool here at night, now it's back to muggy, gray, and hot. Than.. read more



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September love. I have known best days in the months of Autumn. Seem people are looking for someone to stay warm with for the upcoming cold days of Winter. I like the energy and drive of your words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

So sweet, what a perfectly warm review, thanks so much Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Frieda.
Popcorn nymphs. :)
This makes me smile. I have never heard that before. :)
This is so beautiful and fun!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

I love your head, any day, but especially on a good day. :)
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Awh, you're a sweetheart. :) Stay away on bad days, you don't wanna visit.
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

Ok, noted. :)
Your poems captures the burgeoning Fall…

Posted 3 Years Ago


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MomzillaNC

3 Years Ago

Me too. I just learned one today off of Mad Englishman's bio: Viticulter
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh I like that one, didn't know of it either, thanks!
MomzillaNC

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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lovely ... for the last couple weeks as hints of winter give me glimpsing grief .. this poem and this morning (in the 40's last night) turns my little face to greet my favorite of all seasons (spring coming in second) a warm sweater is such an easy comfort and pleasure .. enjoyed your poem Frieda .. nice one for blessed Autumn

E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks E, it's fast becoming a favorite of mine too, snuggle up will ya? :)
This is just beautiful. Good job

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Laurie.
It is amazing. I liked the "wild child autumn". I envy your writing skills, a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Simran.
I love your sense of nature, the change of summer into autumn is beautiful, funny how we get to interpret poems here in our heads and mine keeps seeing that cuddly sweater warmth upon a hearth and its really a powerfully sexy line, did you do that Frieda ? Your writing is an aphrodisiac to love, always great and hot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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R Smith

3 Years Ago

always gonna be a pleasure young lady, always.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Woo, young, haven't heard that in good long while. :)
R Smith

3 Years Ago

why Scarlett you'll always be young to me :)
Perfect poem to get ready for fall! I love autumn!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Bill, enjoy the season!
There is weaving a spell, and then there is Mrs.R weaving a spell...I like those spells the best ;) The Doors also have a song called Wild Child, and this piece put me in mind of Morrison's free verse...Jim was a beatnik essentially, and your beatnik is showing in this one...ha that sounds naughty, but this piece has an air of mischievousness to it so I stand by the observation ;) This is nature's mischievous side...one last hurrah for the carefree days of summer before autumn's colours and dreaded transition to winter take center stage...this one made me want to go prancing barefoot through a field of tall grass with the popcorn nymphs...yes, sweet dreams are made of this :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I think I like gypsy garb better. ;) You still prancing? haha ;)
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha Me too, though I did make another observation which I'm not sure you've seen yet ;) Still pranc.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

I give up, what are you talking about?.....
With Enya streaming through my consciousness, I found myself engaged by this - your "wild child autumn". How poetically perfect it was, how pulsating it read to my senses, to my heart that adores this time of season the most!

So lovely, Frieda!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kelly, I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one!

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