Dulcinea dreaming ~ [Inspired by redzone's review]

Dulcinea dreaming ~ [Inspired by redzone's review]

A Poem by Frieda P
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For Curt, a very special friend ♥

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I'd inscribe the sky for you
       capture a fiery 
               constellation,
bring you moonlight
    in a jar,
i'll be your real
                life Dulcinea, 
if you'll be my 
             Don Quixote

under a cool night's 
mid- summer's breeze,
we'll lie naked betwixt 
          velveteen sandy shores,
      surrender ~
              in the undulating surf
   as the crash
             of majesty's seas
 appeases
            our magnificent     
                 yielding

all I ask in return,
        gently fold my affection's
          passion
      keep it in your heart
                for safekeeping, 
a tender keepsake
                  for endless time



© 2014 Frieda P



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Frieda!!!! I read this last night on my phone, you often say "doing the happy dance", well you have me dancing on Quixotic clouds, heading to that "unreachable star"!!!! Can I confess (I know, not god person), you have been my Sweet Dulcinea from the first poem I read from you. And your affection's passion has been gently folded and takes up a good portion of my heart, it's safe and nurtured without asking.

In the spirit of Feudal, Chivalry, and all that is precious, allow me, El Don Quixote, wear your colors as I unashamedly joust at windmills and reach for your stars.. you already hold mine in your hands... would you care to join me in this quest!!??

Luther Vandross, come on Frieda (Dulcinea), he is one of the most powerful romantic singers and this song.. well, nothing is "impossible" or "hopeless" as I listen to it...

You are so freakin' special Frieda, you know I loves you for "endless time".
~~red(sweetDulcinea'schampion)zone





Posted 3 Years Ago


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Oh this is so beautiful...

I'd inscribe the sky for you
capture a fiery
constellation,
bring you moonlight
in a jar

It's so beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful and loving Frieda.

" I'd inscribe the sky for you
capture a fiery
constellation,
bring you moonlight
in a jar,
i'll be your real
life Dulcinea,
if you'll be my
Don Quixote. "

These lines really means a lot I wish someone like this in my life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


So much sweetness packed into this one. I loved the concept of bringing him moonlight in a jar as well as the line "velveteen sandy shores", that one seemed particularly unique to me. I have felt velveteen sand on just one beach, in Pensacola, Florida.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I absolutely fell into this poem! I was right there, I felt every line, every word, every image was breathtaking!!! This is one of those poems you share and quote - Lovely!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Oh, Frieda P, Don Quixote and Dulcinea! Another love. You keep knocking these balls out of the park. I love everything you write. Thank you again, my friend....:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


its beautiful....i loved the flowing emotions... :))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Freda P, i love this poem. I loved the romantic feel as I read, and the music made it feel like a candle lit romance! Beautiful!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Romantic, and I feel the love between the two. I really felt each and every word of this poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


The sentiment of this piece is so beautiful and filled with love and gently wrapped in passion. I can feel the warmth of love and the feelings of joy radiate out of your words. I liked this piece a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


its a moving piece, and as usual I like your imagery here most,,
a nice piece as I expect from you frieda :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Tags: Don Quixote, Dulcinea, dreams, moonlight, poetry, surrender, affection, endless time

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Frieda P
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