Dulcinea dreaming ~ [Inspired by redzone's review]

Dulcinea dreaming ~ [Inspired by redzone's review]

A Poem by Frieda P
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For Curt, a very special friend ♥

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I'd inscribe the sky for you
       capture a fiery 
               constellation,
bring you moonlight
    in a jar,
i'll be your real
                life Dulcinea, 
if you'll be my 
             Don Quixote

under a cool night's 
mid- summer's breeze,
we'll lie naked betwixt 
          velveteen sandy shores,
      surrender ~
              in the undulating surf
   as the crash
             of majesty's seas
 appeases
            our magnificent     
                 yielding

all I ask in return,
        gently fold my affection's
          passion
      keep it in your heart
                for safekeeping, 
a tender keepsake
                  for endless time



© 2014 Frieda P



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Frieda!!!! I read this last night on my phone, you often say "doing the happy dance", well you have me dancing on Quixotic clouds, heading to that "unreachable star"!!!! Can I confess (I know, not god person), you have been my Sweet Dulcinea from the first poem I read from you. And your affection's passion has been gently folded and takes up a good portion of my heart, it's safe and nurtured without asking.

In the spirit of Feudal, Chivalry, and all that is precious, allow me, El Don Quixote, wear your colors as I unashamedly joust at windmills and reach for your stars.. you already hold mine in your hands... would you care to join me in this quest!!??

Luther Vandross, come on Frieda (Dulcinea), he is one of the most powerful romantic singers and this song.. well, nothing is "impossible" or "hopeless" as I listen to it...

You are so freakin' special Frieda, you know I loves you for "endless time".
~~red(sweetDulcinea'schampion)zone





Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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such sweet sentiment ma'am.. that gifted pen weaves its magic spell again.. there is no limit to what our hearts can offer and do for our other half... the heights that passion and affection can take the spirit is limitless... such a precious gift is friendship and to pair that with matters of the heart can be such a breathtaking experience. to know another soul.... to truly see into the depths of what makes them so unique and special--nourish it, admire it, and enjoy it in return.. lovely imagery in this one..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Such a beautiful, tender expression of love and devotion... Your heart shines through each lifting line, like a song... Sighing...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Frieda!!!! I read this last night on my phone, you often say "doing the happy dance", well you have me dancing on Quixotic clouds, heading to that "unreachable star"!!!! Can I confess (I know, not god person), you have been my Sweet Dulcinea from the first poem I read from you. And your affection's passion has been gently folded and takes up a good portion of my heart, it's safe and nurtured without asking.

In the spirit of Feudal, Chivalry, and all that is precious, allow me, El Don Quixote, wear your colors as I unashamedly joust at windmills and reach for your stars.. you already hold mine in your hands... would you care to join me in this quest!!??

Luther Vandross, come on Frieda (Dulcinea), he is one of the most powerful romantic singers and this song.. well, nothing is "impossible" or "hopeless" as I listen to it...

You are so freakin' special Frieda, you know I loves you for "endless time".
~~red(sweetDulcinea'schampion)zone





Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know Curt will be floored by this poem, everything about it reminds me of him. Sweet, gentle and romantic...perfectly pinned. Im sure he is grinning right now!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I don't know how you do that! Time after time you seem to write so effortlessly and add stuff like you have lived in a history, but you are now! Your writing is wonderful and I really enjoy reading your work! Thank you for sharing it!

Beautiful..... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Picturing the poem in my head was so soothing :) its lovely and the storytelling is also brilliant...so much said in so little :)
-Sunya

Posted 3 Years Ago


very romantic, very beautiful and the touch of history, the endless love. Touche!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful! So elegantly scribed. I just love the way you make magic with your words. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Your images bring the Impossible Dream to life - a beautiful poem, made sweeter by the fact that it was friend-inspired. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful, simply beautiful.
And romantic, simply romantic!
I love it. :) simply love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Tags: Don Quixote, Dulcinea, dreams, moonlight, poetry, surrender, affection, endless time

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