LOVE (10W)

LOVE (10W)

A Poem by Frieda P

                         

© 2014 Frieda P


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A heart apart, torn asunder. The sting of something gone. You felt it once. you miss it now. But for all the pain of not having know it, we still find love. We fall in and out. We scream, break, shout. We curse the day we met. But for all the fear of having never known it, we still find love. It know nothing of the things for which we attend it. Love is blind to the pain for which we offend it. Love cannot feel the fear we impart upon it. But there it always is, in the heart and soul. Ever waiting for us to find it.

You wrote something so simple and so succinct. Pointed directly where it is needed most. A topical solution to heel what might be broken. Very good write indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Wow thanks so much realmwriter, I appreciate all the time you put into my wee 10 word poem, your rev.. read more
realmwriter

9 Years Ago

Insperation comes from many places. You are welcome.l



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I never knew smthin as short as that could be so meaningful!
Thank u so much for shAring!
It's amazin!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Frieda, simply written with utter perfection in every detail. Bravo, my friend. I love reading your words, listening to the songs you pair them with, and just sitting there letting the duo seep into my bones. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Why have you blown me away?

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow..........superb:) I'll always be the admirer of your poetry forever.........

Posted 9 Years Ago


Frieda, hey hey..how have you been? nice to read u


Posted 9 Years Ago


Thoughtful . . .
(Good music, too!)

Posted 9 Years Ago


very simple but very deep, love as a word means nothing without the heart in which it must dwell, thank you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


what a well spring of inspiration .. so true! ... and to keep myself from getting too mushy ... fart is a four letter word; and it does rhyme with heart ;) muahahaha!

seriously Frieda .. you have penned something that says it all .. in 10 beautiful significant words .. beautiful! just beautiful.
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love, in harmony with heart... You really have a wonderful way with these 10 word pieces, Frieda - so much depth in so few words...

Posted 9 Years Ago


ouch, yeah it is, its nothing more than a word if its not felt, and it is something that is really worth everyhting when its ryhmed with heart.. that expressed alot :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 27, 2014
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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