Daniel holmes

meet me Daniel Holmes aka the SPARK there more specials out there at least i hope there are

Chapter1: Daniel Holmes

Tell us said the head scientist she was wearing her hair up in a bun ,glasses and the average white lab coat . I sighed , um my name is uh.... the assistant held a video camera to my face , ''a little space please,'' I said in a rude tone . The assistant rolled her eyes as the body guard stood at the door ready to pounce at me .'' My name is Daniel Holmes i'm 16 years old . ''And the scientist said i'm an orphan , because of you b******s I snarled .'' Do you need another shot !''the scientist threatened . I gulp ,''no ma'am.'' Good she said slightly angry. ''You may go .'' Wait I got one question. ''  What?'' she said. could you just promise and protect me and everything ?'' Yeah she said your like my own child , I mumble well that's a group i don't want to fit into. ''What was that?  NOTHING''

I roam the halls in hunger , i think have I even eaten today,my stomach grumbled again.Okay, okay lets go get some food . I turned left down the hall and headed toward the cafeteria .Darcy a cook was serving chili and cornbread today .''How you doing she asked concerned and trying to read my emotions .'' Its nothing,'' I lied between my teeth.

I grab a  a muffin and I was about to leave the line but.. Darcy  stopped'' me everything will be okay.''

Okay it was not, some way and some how  I found myself eating by the trashcan it smelled HORRIBLE over there like a bunch of farts and sweat .But i ate my food anyway . The head scientist children come my way .I mumble here to start trouble. The youngest Victoria  a girl too, Jackson the middle child and finally Tommy the worst of the three

''Oh who's that ?'' says Jackson the two boys pointed at me,oh says Tommy its Dannie .The BIG,UGLY,trash boy Jackson commented . Hey Jackson said waving in front of her face. Oh yeah he's umm... he's trashy i guess -_- she said sarcastic . They left to get some food from Darcy .Dannie! Dannie! Dannie ! is the s**t control Tommy said, Jackson laughs i guess that was what i was smelling . I tackle Tommy to the floor,'' say something! say something again. '' He burped your a real jack a*s . He pushed me off of him and started throwing punches i kicked him in the leg hearing a snap do it again I shocked him with lightning turning his white clothing pitch black like the night sky. Someone grabbed me both of my arms and threw me over there shoulder . ''Hey put me down''  i pouted,'' this is not was what was intended ''i scream trying to break free from the guards hold . He threw me into the room with a bunk bed and the domino set, comics and the SHADOWS.

I stare up at the ceiling .I was in the same room i was in earlier ,they closed the door and locked it immediately before I could jump up and leave .I sat in the darkness I had to admit i was ashamed . I sigh i see darkness smile back at me from every corner . I grinned i was surprised i did that i said thinking out loud .My fingers crackled with lightning . what else can i do i snapped my fingers the light turned on and i snapped my fingers and they turned off. i sat on the cold floor and shivered I'd never like to be by myself especially in the DARKNESS. I GULP that's the only thing that seriously scared the you know what OUT OF ME , I put my head against the wall you really notice how slow time passed when doing nothing .Victoria the girl from earlier opened the door Tommy wants you NOW,I snored as my answer .Dannie! I woke up really fast shocking her on the shoulder  ouch  she said really spark she said with an negative attitude . We walked down the halls as Victoria kept her distance scared to get shock again I grin at the fact of that . Shut up she said we turn left down the hall going the other way of the cafeteria  and i was dying for food always wanting some pumpkin pie.Dannie she said angry  now this the part you say SORRY to Tommy, 

Why not  i said sarcastically .I apologize to Tommy . He glared  at me like and wasn't good enough. Sorry he shouted ,hmph! man hes a dumb a*s . God i hate you i run out the room with Victoria following behind me i cant.. ugh why did you follow me i protested . Jackson said loudly across the hall Victoria in love with Dannie.They both laughed.

Hey I say I don't like Victoria just like you ! I snapped my fingers the lights turned on . She looked into  my dark blue eyes. and sid there NO turning back Dannie NO home no future you know this is the start now you find the end. she leaves the bathroom. 

Huh? i shrugged my shoulders and headed toward my room. Later that night I lay in my bed in my t-shirt and boxers watching tv. Someone knocked on my door i opened it.

Author's Note

finally finished chapter 2 here we come XD

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You make the dialogue and the unfolding story all flow together and feel so real.

[Parker101]

Thanks for the comment

[Parker101]

i have started 1 chapter in the fire (://www.writerscafe.org/writing/fruit22/1784355/
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[alice]

how do you write soo good parks i love plz make more you can help me write my book

[Parker101]

sure
i could help