THE STORM

THE STORM

A Poem by highthought
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Its a few words poem

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Weigh your load...
Before facing the storm
Check what you know 
before playing any role 

© 2015 highthought


Author's Note

highthought
i have stopped writing for a while and i trying to come back so i am just taking it easy on myself by writing short lines

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highthought: You said a whole lot in a few words, what sage advise; and your timing is PERFECT. The storm is a good title also, It's certainly very insightful, my mind is tinkering away. But if you don't know, you just don't know! So sometimes in life, all the mud and muck we get frozen in and stuck and it's piled a mile high, and we have to dig ourselves out, then maybe we'll know, ya know...Seriously, I love it. Well done. Made me think about all my thinking, so maybe I should just stop and weigh that load, but if I do, I'll never go. Thank you so very much. Dale

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short but meaningful write.... Must always ascertain if we are prepared to face the storm and have the requisite strength to do so.

Posted 8 Years Ago


highthought

8 Years Ago

Hope if I remember those few words during my trip in life
This one I am visiting again, and I must say that you give good wisdom and directions in a small space with this one. It relates well to your title.
Sometimes, small things come in great packages.
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


highthought

8 Years Ago

I wish if I remember those lines in my actual life ...we face problems everyday...
Josie E. Cook M. A.

8 Years Ago

Yes, it can be overwhelming....
It's great widsom that we learn from this great poem. I like this advice. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


highthought

8 Years Ago

Thank you for passing by ....to be safe we need to be careful
Ah, so so true. Great shortie.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

highthought

8 Years Ago

Wish if I can remember that wherever I go ..thanks

Thought that's only a part of a p.. read more
Love the ocean and water, but never got to sail. Your few words express what I have felt of the asea. You better know what your doing in case you face the unexpected at sea. Very nice. Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Willard Wells

8 Years Ago

Rather than my advise, it was what was in your words.
highthought

8 Years Ago

Well.. ok I ll say it ... These lines were taking from an old poem of mine if u wish I ll send u a r.. read more
Willard Wells

8 Years Ago

I would be happy to read it. Thanks,
I like this, very inspiring , but I think it should be weigh, not weight, cause it's a verb sentence :), thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

highthought

8 Years Ago

wow.. it will be manged soon
nice poem , thanks for sharing it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem. Just because the lines are short, doesn't make it any less meaningful. Keep up the great work

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Ok i am a male , English is my second language, so it's hard for me to give a fair review sometimes, so dont expect a lot.. i am a sales manager and, had this attraction to writing more..

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