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THE FALLING

THE FALLING

A Poem by highthought
"

SHE WAS TOLD THAT HE DOESNT CARE

"

 

She was told

" Your husband cares no more "

They were answered

 "that's an easy thing to solve!

It takes nothing but a smile, and a look

His legs will shake!

 his body will fall "


© 2011 highthought



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Simplicity is a very special thing to grasp. To say much in so few words - succinct in other words...Mozart once said 'To speak well and eloquently is a very great art but an even greater one is to know the moment to stop!' You have done that here...nicely spun...reminds me of my poem 'A Cry for Purity' - your review would be much admired on my part. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but strong. I like this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this one a lot great imagery

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Straight to the point.. Great imagery in so few a lines.

Mags xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it! It's strong and well said! Good job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really good.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Ok i am a male , English is my second language, so it's hard for me to give a fair review sometimes, so dont expect a lot.. i am a sales manager and, had this attraction to writing more..

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