THE TRUE BELIEF OF ISLAM

I WROTE IT TO GIVE YOU THE FACT

Grass becomes green
not by coincidence,
but by the will of the creator of all human beings.

Eyes could see beautiful things
especially in the spring,
your eyes are yours;
you choose to open them,
to see what's around you,
or you choose to close them,
if you don't want to see the truth,

You do that by your own will,
no one is forcing you to do anything

your will is your own
whether you choose the bad or good.
Life is full of things,
it’s up to you to choose.

You always pick a great scene to see;
but do you always choose to say the best there is


A flower gives a nice smell to the atmosphere,
ask yourself what do you give.

Creatures like people and trees,
have one thing in common at least
when two things are alike,
same things happen to both sides

It’s logical that you could be
broken into pieces like a tree.
It’s true that you sleep,
like any other human being.

Anyone who is mortal, who sleeps, sits and gets weak,
He is surely not your creator,
neither he is the creator of all what you are seeing

Author's Note

CHECK PART 2

Reviews

[Aya]

it's so inspiring i likes

A flower gives a nice smell to the atmosphere,
ask yourself what do you give.
this part spoke to me as humans are different each one gives different energy either positive of negative or nothing at all !
Anyone who is mortal, who sleeps, sits and gets weak,
He is surely not your creator,
neither he is the creator of all what you are seeing.
this part is unquestionable really great work.

[Mockingbird]

there is a genuine morality here. it's true we have the freewill to choose, thereby we have the choice of bad or good. i think whatever we choose we must take responsibility and accountability for our actions. great poem.

[khalid]

accordingly to belief and words, it is really great writing, jazak Allah 5airan 3alih. but i wish you accept my points without feeling offended, there is a line i couldnt understand what you mean with it..but do you always choose the best there is...i think you mean to say..but do you always choose the best from what there is? also, i think it was better if you said..what about you?what did you give? instead of ask yourself what you give..
but really it is great in meanings ..

keep on

[A.E. Surdam]

The words sing as you read. Great effect.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true and powerful. In a world of great mystery and beauty. Something had to allow us to live and have the opportunity to do good things. I like the way you expressed the simple and strong logic of what is life and who create it. Thank you for this poem. I would to read more.
Coyote

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Well written my friend. I already read part 2 and that was just superb on every level.

"A flower gives a nice smell to the atmosphere,
ask yourself what do you give."

That really spoke to me and my answer to that may probably be that if it weren't for us humans, the flowers would never give the nice smell to the atmosphere. Earth needs us as much as we need it.

[Layla J Omorose]

I have to go read part 2 now. But this was very well written.

[Helena]

I read part 2 first lol. This is just as beautiful as part 2. So eloquently written and meaningful. Well done!

[EMW]

You always write such interesting poems. I love them all. You are a very great poet. I know I've said that on pretty much every comment but its true.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very well written; I love these lines:

"Anyone who is mortal, who sleeps, sits and gets weak,
He is surely not your creator,
neither he is the creator of all what you are seeing"
Very nice flow and artistry