HOUSE OF SADNESS

HOUSE OF SADNESS

A Poem by highthought
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A NEST AND HOUSE

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She was asked to smile,

Instead, she replied,

"It is easy to find a bird in a nest,
but, hard to get a smile from the house of sadness."

© 2011 highthought


Author's Note

highthought
it still something

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very nice and true

Posted 11 Years Ago


shows despair and hurt. it really is hard to smile when your heart is broken. great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


like the analogy

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short but sweet, tells a story and it's meaning. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it truly is hard to get a smile out of a house of sadness. even a house of fear, hate, or a house of anger. i like this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I hope that smile can make it out of saddness' house. You captured the emotion and frustration well. I don't like to be sad, but when I am I hate it when someone asks me to smile; easier said than done sometimes. Good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


really unique...I like how simple it is but how true it is too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting but is full of meaning... good!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can certainly relate. Simple format and elegant wording, very nice, indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this - i have been asked to smile but it is as you write-
""It is easy to find a bird in a nest,
but, hard to get a smile from the house of sadness."
This is my favorite of your so far.

Chloe

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Ok i am a male , English is my second language, so it's hard for me to give a fair review sometimes, so dont expect a lot.. i am a sales manager and, had this attraction to writing more..

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