EYES & HEARTS

The competition is going on between eyes and hearts

So whenever you let your eyes lead your heart, tired you will be

because of scenes that you will see....

Scenes.. that you are not capable of..
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Scenes.. you will not remain patient for the loss of its sum

Author's Note

Watch it.....

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Nice piece of work!
it definitely has some truth to it, I to did a piece similar to this one,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Emily Rae]

the eyes will naturally wander. the heart should be our sobering anchor.

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

I'm not really for really short poetry becuz usually it doesn't feel like it has an end but this one is ok . And eyes lead your heart ? I believe in my own opinion it should be the other way around !

[Roxi L]

Very deep. I like it!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Interesting.

[Aurora Lynn]

A very interesting poem! Sometimes your eyes and your heart DO disagree. Thank you for writing this very powerful poem.

[Magdelena]

You know, you are one heck of a writer.. From the first moment I rwad you I felt it. Your images are brought forth in such a way that one can feel your words, instead of just seeing them.. The eyes are the mirror to ones soul, but the heart is the very essence of that soul..

I truly enjoyed and at this very moment am wondering on how one can be so wise wile many of us still are lost inside the deep darkness of our minds

Mags xx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fierce and almost audible piece, it makes the reader engage and inspires conversation, well written, good job

[Stef Outsiders]

Full of wisdom and deep..

[Lucy]

Very deep and contemplative. You have a very good point, by the way...