WAVES AND SEA ( PART 3)

A LOVE STORY

A wave of greed hit his sea after a while
stroking the net, tearing its pieces apart

A male fish with golden teeth,
came and answer to the father' appeal,
cutting the thick rope of the net
taking the girl, but not the love in her depth.

A storm hit the lover’s sea,
once he heard about the loss of his dear
breaking all pieces in his deep,
drowning him in tears.

His friends took him home..
helped him to forget about his sorrow,

his uncle gave him a big lie,
everybody is talking to him....
but no one is getting any  reply.

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

Great poem! Heart wrenching as the story unfolds.......

[Gypsie]

Such sadness, I must admit that I am enjoying the pain in this piece

[Lily Mae]

A sad piece with the loss of someone that was very loved and even with the comfort of friends your ability to speak is still void.. Nice work..xx