IF IT WASN T FOR YOU

Is it love?

 

 

 

Breaking doors of loneliness

Crushing walls of sadness

Crossing roads of bitterness

Until I reach to imagine your face s sweetness

With no snide remarks

Nor with false friends in front,,

with your thought at head

i rest

 settled and calm

 

The inner strengths begins to come

As I find  missing Me , the one 

who might have been lost 

                                    If you hadn t been once around 

Author's Note

Yeah ...the inside thinking, without it its hard to carry on

Reviews

[B]

I want to read this again and again and again

I see beauty in it

And i think i love it

[highthought]

Fighting just to get peacefull moments with whom we love even if it was only by thoughts ..welcome to my page

[B]

Pleasure to be welcomed to your page

[highthought]

Any time I ll check ur work soon

[Kousika]

Hey .. A small innocent love..
I loved these following lines..

"Breaking doors of loneliness

Crushing walls of sadness

Crossing roads of bitterness

Until I reach to imagine your face s sweetness"

[Lucas]

i love it. very unique and abstract. is there a deeper meaning in here. if so would love to hear it.

[highthought]

that will take another poem ...i might write it if i did i ll u know

[Lucas]

kewl. please can u review my poem. open. its an abstract poem

[lovergirl]

I just Loved this one ;) it's simple yet full of emotions , i'm gonna add it in my library :)

[Chain of Hearts]

So unique, I love this piece. I find that when a poem rhymes it gives the piece a more cute and catchy taste, but this poem doesn't even need that. With no rhyming this poem gives off a sincere message of true love.
Awesome work!
-LK

[myself]

I like it how the very thought of someone you love can make you serene and also help you find your true self. It's a lovely poem. :)

[FateDictates]

love what you did here and reads silky smooth...

[hannah]

very sweet poem, and it's very hard to tell that english isn't your first language! great job c:

[justjenn_2u]

Great format. On 4th line, little "s" that needs deleted but it still didn't take away from the poem (just letting you know). Very meaningful and shows strength to show your weakness by not having someone once in your life. You have deep inner thought and I have appreciation for that.

[Ana Soo]

It's a beautiful stimulation of emotion to a higher level influenced by another soul directly in the mind of the narrator. A few jumbles here and there but they don't affect the value of your poem. This is a good write if you wanna know.