Help!

Help!

A Poem by Kirby Inc.
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A last plea for help...

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Help

I'm falling

Slowly, into nothing

A lost, troubled existence

Desperate, hoping someone still cares

Reaching, but I fall

The light dims

Losing myself...

Help...


© 2009 Kirby Inc.



Author's Note

Kirby Inc.
If this seems like a rather elementary school style of poem, forgive me. I just needed something to get me back into a writing mood...

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Wow. Si short yet so powerful and raw. If you are interested, please read my allegory called "The Hill of Pathways". I love how real this is

Posted 1 Month Ago


The deepest message can be conveyed in the simplest of forms, which you do beautifully with this poem. There is an elegance, that can only be found in simplicity. You have framed it, perfectly. Thank you, for sharing this poem with us. Hope it has jumpstart your poetic motor.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Forgiven..you know there is merit it simplicity..and expression in poetry is not a contest we hold for ourselves.. one small poem to spawn more and not a bad small poem at all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh this is a nice poem. It's interesting and fun to read, even though the message is sad. :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the simplicity of this poem; it doesn't really need deep details to get the message across. It is simply a call for help. The way you formatted this was nice, I think it goes well with the poem. Good write, I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a great poem! I really liked it! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it i think you made a wonderful point
well said.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 9, 2009

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