Hearts On My Paper

Written in some spanish class for my boyfriend.

So here I am, drawing those hearts again
Wishing you were here.
Wishing I could feel your cheek brush against mine,
And hear your voice that is so sincere.

Each heart I draw represents a smile,
No wonder my paper is covered so.
Each heart I draw represents a moment,
A moment that I never want to let go.

As my pen runs out of ink, I don't care.
Because I know that the paper would never have enough space
To be covered with even half the times,
That I am dreaming of your face.

Reviews

[Mariah]

Aww, I like this. It takes the idea of doodling hearts all over a paper (like, who HASN'T done that?) which makes it easy to connect to, and also has a great ending.

[Corentin Argyris]

This is a sweet poem from what I read and honestly I've been known to write poems (that I haven't put on here) that are for my girl and I've done things like that with graphics. On my profile I have two images saying "I love Ba en Aset" which is my fiancee's profile. lol So yeah, I love, love. As well as I can see that happening, writing stuff with the last name (As other stated) and all. Anyways, now I do mean to go back to writing my chapter even though I didn't get to doing much before either. I'm such an unorganized writer. Lmfao.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

very beautifully written...i love drawing hearts! Good write!

[Tania Leigh]

A very sweet poem.....the second stanza is my favourite:

"Each heart I draw represents a smile,
No wonder my paper is covered so.
Each heart I draw represents a moment,
A moment that I never want to let go."

This was a pleasure to read :-)

[T. R. Writer]

Once again i wish someone was writing about me. you have a very romantic and loving side to you that comes out wonderfully in your writing. You might even want to consider writing romance greeting cards :)

[Nik Dendera]

"Each heart I draw represents a moment,
A moment that I never want to let go."
Lovely lines!

Its a cute piece, I can imagine a young girl sitting there, lost in thought, covering her books with hearts and kisses.
Nicely done! Its not too slushy romantic, but its an honest piece :)

[Angel Bird]

You clothed into wonderful words moments which each and every young, and even not so young girl has experienced.

Your poem opened memory lane to me Hmmmmmm .........

Well done!

[The Musings of Mary H.]

This reminds of times when I would practice writing my first name with some other boy's last name. I think this continued up to my early early adulthood until a certain point where I felt empowered enough to do without marriage. Oh, well...I'm rambling. An excellent write with a great visual!

"Each heart I draw represents a smile,
No wonder my paper is covered so."

[Cynthia Barrick (CHING..]

You captured true feelings here I really thought it is an excellent piece

[Vatsayayana]

Ahhh... this makes my heart ache so.
I've missed a love such as that.
Your blend of emotion here, within your words, is stunning.
I feel BOTH the elementary school girl, with her first crush on the boy in the back row, 3rd center of course.
And also the experienced, wise-cracking, older female who seems to have seen it all, done it all and yet... that sweet man from the grocers, who bestowed upon her a daisy and little boy grin.
Ahhhh... the act of falling in love all over again.
:-)