Dragon's Nest

Dragon's Nest

A Poem by Lox
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(c) to the online MMORPG Dragon Nest.

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With tools and weapons
and one brave soul
To face fangs and talons
One shall bear all

With power that is gained
to slay rising darkness
Shall minds be abstained
and hearts be in illness

This Dragon's Nest
Shall be left challenged
With morale in downfall
And the village saddened

With a sword in my hand
Let you hear my war-cry
For here I shall stand
With my life 'til I die

With a bow at my back
and my pace quick as wind
Shall I slay a Dragon Black
To inform it of its sins

This Dragon's Nest
Shall be left in fighting
With morale slowly rising
And the village now hoping

With a mace in my arm
And a shield on another
Shall I bring you my psalm
Brought by the Divine Mother

A staff up my ace
A book through my knowledge
Shall I destroy you with malice
All elements at siege

This Dragon's Nest
Shall be left defeated
With morale high at edge
And the village conceited

Shall this Dragon arise
From darkness sublime
Should we meet demise
In a matter of time...

© 2015 Lox


Author's Note

Lox
Style and format based on the Saint Haven theme song, "Day of Destiny"

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Decent meter, and decent rhyme scheme.
However we are missing emotions. This is a piece driven by action, so this is technically an epic poem, but you need to show us more if you are going to do that. Imagery to tell us what you see, and tell us what is going on. This can be very difficult with the rhyme scheme you have chosen.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

You really put me to an edge when you review, you corner me with your words with a cliff behind me. .. read more
Armanis

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. I am committed to make sure that real literature is being written, not just words o.. read more
Dragons are a favorite. Always have been. I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

Who hates dragons anyways? Haha thank you for your generous review. Please accept my friend request .. read more
Epic poem, your words exuded strong themes of fortitude, determination and courage making it awesome to read. =) well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

I am glad you think so Robb! Thanks for the review and may I add you as a friend?
-inactive now-

8 Years Ago

already accepted =)
The words and style kinda intrigued me, but I don't think I got the story behind. Nice work nonetheless.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

Its a story of bravery my friend. :) all the words in the poem hide no meaning but portray what they.. read more
Haha. Very very well done. Quite often, this is the style I will shoot and quite often this style has led me bigger works. This is a great piece and a sign of good things to come!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

I just had a wonderful Christmas today with my family and friends I'm sorry I haven't replied quickl.. read more

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Added on December 23, 2015
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Lox
Lox

Batangas, Philippines



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