Purpose of the dead

Purpose of the dead

A Story by Lox
"

Oh look at all these inspiration.

"
"Not all things broken
are to be vanished ignored
Its dead not useless."

© 2015 Lox


Author's Note

Lox
What can't be used unless broken?

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It's like walking pneumonia when it is dead is it not? People try to ignore all things like an echo they are used to hearing in the hall way but can not deny the gone but not forgotten element. All things are broken and have to be. That is how they become useful. A chair is just a reflection of the tree that was shaped into it, the ore is just a memory to the sword.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

I was taken aback by your poetic words, I'm almost moved to tears on how beautiful your review was. .. read more
Interesting and something dead become useful in other ways. Snake skin boots would work. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Broken can be fixed. The dead are alive in our hearts. Our memories keep them with us.
Useless if a feeling and perception. I see lots of potential in a junk yard. You can create
the most amazing things from things people no longer wanted or needed.
People are just as amazing. Someone can see your uniqueness, while it may not be seen by others.
It is there just the same! Good poem I got a lot out of it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

Stop! You're going to make me cry with such wonderful words! I am thankful you think of me as "uniqu.. read more
Junction

8 Years Ago

Your very welcome!!!!!! Your writing is vey high caliber and I enjoy reading it!!!!!
Bahaha! Here I am questioning myself, and it's about an egg. Lol. However, good job regardless!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

Well let me ask you! What can't be used unless broken? Haha yes, an egg. Dead = broken; Purpose=usef.. read more
PhoenixDown

8 Years Ago

Like a butterfly... from a cocoon....

NO PROBLEM!
Intriguing. There is a purpose to the dead. They make room for the living, for the next generations...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lox

8 Years Ago

The funny thing is, the hidden meaning behind this haiku are eggs! Thanks for the review, may I add .. read more
Philip Muls

8 Years Ago

Yes absolutely
Good job. I enjoy writing, which makes me question myself. And you my friend have achieved that.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Lox
Lox

Batangas, Philippines



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