Tickles

Senryu

Twisting and turning,

Fits of giggles escaping

Stop that! It tickles!

Reviews

[Paza]

This is so cute!

[Morgie W.]

Haiku? It's good, not the best. I can sort of see where you're coming from writing it, but it's kind of hard. I wouldn't use the exclaimation marks, more as commas. The last one is ok, but otherwise, it kind of breaks it apart.

[SamBug]

lol. It was fun. I remember always loving being tickled. It always excited me. I loved this poem because it brought back my child hood. Great write.

[Marina]

I love this.
It reminds me of the poems my teacher gave us to read in first grade.
This is awsome.

Great job. Sweet Write,
Rina