Seven Months of Lies

After seven months of loving him with all I had, Christian broke my heart. Josh was my First Boyfriend, Christian my First Love, and Michael is my True Love. First boyfriend brings tears, first love brings hurt, but loss of true love would bring death.

Jack Skellington is dead, Sally shot him in the head.
His heart an empty hole, what was going through his skull?
His love was just a trick, all his lies just make me sick.
Without a tear he broke my heart, he never loved me from the start.
He didn't want me anymore, now my tears forever pour.
His hate and anger like a knife, he stabbed me and took my life.
His love was just a lie, now he leaves me here to die.
 

Reviews

[Serendipity]

So sad.

I know the pain of "His love was just a trick." It hurts so much that you feel like you can't carry on. But we learn from this and another will come our way. They will all make us cry, "Without a tear he broke my heart," just remember that not all are the same. Other will not lie, "he never loved me from the start." You will find love, we always do.

[Natasha Ashway]

The raw painful emotions here are stark and vivid. Everyone who's loved, lost love and had a shattered heart knows exactly what this is about. I mark present.
Thank you for sharing. Truth, nakedness and human expression are the most beautiful things about our art.
Love and hugs!

[poddar kushal]

this is a wonderfully creative writing... very matured. i am going to dig more of you

[Kaykay]

great ver good . I 'll you know who wins on the 1st

[Laura E. Aranda]

Don't let a guy make you feel like this. Never go back to someone that belittles you! I do have to agree with the previous reader, it feels as if this was not a poem from your heart. well written but not completely true......lea

[KUFU]

You know you love him! You would run to Johnny or em ahem...Jack if he asked for your hand again. Those words you write are hollow. There is no endearing quality about them. This work did not come from the heart. Or, either you didn't really love him as much as you lead us on to believe. Hmm...