Qualities

Qualities

A Poem by garrshaw
"

Beyond the veil of names.

"

Every quality has a name
Each of those names can be seen
Every time we see the same
Each quality inward leads


We aren’t so much who we say we are
As who we wish we’d be "
Who it is we wish we were
Has no name we can see

© 2015 garrshaw


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This almost feels somewhat woolly and tongue-twisted. Almost.
The philosophical introspection makes a succinct poem, and an interesting read.

Some nice thoughts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


garrshaw

8 Years Ago

Thanks Charlie - I agree... Almost - life on the edge
that nameless self we strive for....yes we wish...but if we have those qualities that make us who we are and they are good qualities...
we won't have to wish for long.

nicely expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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garrshaw

8 Years Ago

Interesting. Thanks for your review Jacob. Sorry for the late reply - too much work these days. Soon.. read more

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