I Would Rather

Love's fight song.

 

Be held in his arms

as the moon peaks

in through the blinds.

 

Feeling the breeze

meander in like

a thief stealing my

warmth; our warmth

 

His kiss, his touch

causing my back

to arch with

pleasure

 

Losing

all

inhibitions,

surrendering

it all

and willing

to fight

for it all

without question

Author's Note

This developed from a feeling I got about my lover.

Reviews

[Emily Rose]

Very sweet and passionate. I admire your subtlety - just enough detail to let your readers understand your images, but not quite enough to be expilicit. Wonderful!

I was a little confused by your first line, but then I realized that it's an extension of the title. Very clever! You may, however, want to get rid of the period in the title, since neither title nor first line makes sense as its own sentence.

Well done!

[Christopher Marlowe]

Love the picture...Goes right along with the poem

Ai no corrida (Love's bull-fighting arena in Japanese)

D

[T]

and a beautiful tribute it is...a simple but lovely poem

[Vanessa P]

Simple and sweet but very effective. I can feel the pleasure you were receiving. My favorite part was this:
Losing
all
inhibitions,
surrendering

That sums it up with great passion, what it is to make love to someone.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very sweet and romantic poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Legion]

Imagination is the best aphrodisiac. Splendid piece. Hope he reciprocates in kind. :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

What a fortunate lover !

This is well written, conveys a feeling of the warmth
and desire involved.
Nice background, "as the moon peeks in through the blinds."
The economy of words is attractive. Saying a lot in the fewest
possible words is always nice.
My Favorite !
My Rate: 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh