Grass

Emerging slowly

into the sun to own life

only to know death.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning Haiku!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-7 contest!

[Ravenskald]

so is the fate of all things
sweet dreams

R

[Laura E. Aranda]

ooohhh
this is my favorite of yours by far!
Good luck in the contest! The poor grass!
Cheers,lea

[Tai-San]

This is great! its small and wonderful!

[crap]

short and sweet, there is nothing wrong with that, consider changing "to find" into "for " it's essentially less words to say the same thing, makes the lines more even as well.