Soul Wanted...

Soul wanted...

Emotionally poor,

Mentally bankrupt,

Will amend my dues with interest,

homeless heart,

actively in search of my once qualified Soul!

Reviews

[B]

I say i could lose anything
but my heart i would die if it goes poor
you are extremely expressive
such few words
but i can feel everything you write

[Ghazal]

Thanks Nisreen...I am still though very much emotionally poor,,,, writing is certainly not enough.

[B]

If you write like that
you have the richest soul

[Ghazal]

It is empty ... Or maybe I don't see its richness

[B]

you cant see yourself
others do

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I nearly missed reading this. Would a been a shame if i wouldn't read it.

Very well expressed. Sometimes we all feel like we need to go back a little, change some of the things back, because they're not right the way they are. Or simply be who we were, before a change in our lives... Awesome write :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome descriptions in each line... loved it! Homeless heart... never thought of that and it's my favorite part of the write :)

[Ghazal]

Glad you liked it and you could relate

[Ali M.]

i love the way this is written. it was easy to read, to myself and out loud, and it packed a lot of meaning as well. my husband and i connected to this from two completely different places which made reading it personal. i think in itself says wonderful things about your writing :)

[Ghazal]

Thank you lovely Ali :)

[Ghazal]

sooo thank you very much Hanir:)

[hanir]

Well written! It doesnt have to be long..it just have to be beautiful like this. 😊

[Ghazal]

Thanks Terry...maybe just as short as your poems , yet ........fulfilling !

[terry smith]

Loved it!! keep writing and I will keep reading.