What Time Can Reveal

Love what brings so much joy can bring so much sadness!

Time can reveal a hidden truth

That I sit here and preach to you

You hurting because your love was true

The fool you waste it on was always lying to you

Too many lies, and to many injustice crime  are taking root

Make matter worst he still cheating on you

Gas his ego up now he wears the suit

Your friends believe it, and you say i don't think he'd achieve it

Accepting the role of false within fact I’m healing through

While my soul cries out surreal visions on cue

My thoughts run constantly into a notion of death

While my heart keeps throbbing placing ahead

Time was the essence that rendered him blind

Who am I to say that his love was a lie

You reach with your whispers to start for a new

But it’s hard to let go when these feelings don’t move

.......A Collaboration between Ghost Skittles and Emphasis 

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Very nice write. You did a fine job with this idea....I enjoyed reading it..Bravo you two :) I agreed that it's hard to let go...many times we think that we have..only to turn around and see those same feelings lurking right behind us like a constant shadow... :)

[momochiloves]

I enjoyed reading this very much. You two seem to have brilliance when collaborating together:)

[JustLorry]

Excellent collab. Seamless and a great read.

[Swapz747]

Great write with an intriguing notion .. :-)

[♛ Jordan Midnight..]

A wonderful write from 2 very profound writers the Pen is waved, and the Accolade is given

[Cassie Fraga]

Great job with it honey!! and I love the title I knew you would hook it up with a good one!! thank you for the invite on the Collab. we'll have to do another one soon sometime!!

[Secret Valentine]

I like this. its so true and spoken with real meaning. I love it. Good job!