Love at first sight...a verse i spit apart of Incomplete Puzzle Set

Just feeling really poetic at the moment.

Love at first sight 

Isn't what it's crack up to be

That's what I told myself until to happen to me

Thinking so hard you'd thought i'd had an epiphany

So interested in you like they were wolf gang symphonies

In my eyes you're perfect forget the line of symmetry

But you're heart shape was solely based in geometry

Things fell into place so naturally

Guess you can call it chemistry

Better yet it's a mystery

Of the ages as I hesitate to turn the pages 

Crushing on you has my mind running in mazes

Ever since i met you my life is switching paces

M.I.A now on a regular basics

  

Reviews

[momochiloves]

I would really like to see the finished piece. I love the way you worded it and the way of how you feel when you meet someone for the first time, but everything seems so intriguing about them.

[TL Boehm]

ain't that the truth. Not sure why but I was drawn more to the first half than the second. Just a personal choice and not indicative of the strength of the write.

[Robbie]

You've conveyed Unrequited Love...the yearning for attention, yet this girl is distracted... Nicely done...keep writing my friend! :)

[Shy Girl]

That was cute...the way the worded ending to each line. I'm interested to see the finished poem :)