Secret Affair

Secret Affair

A Poem by GlamGirl
"

I'm sorry, babe

"

Babe, I’m sorry.

I’ve been having this affair.

 

Every night, me and him

We sleep in the same room.

He’s always calling to me,

and sometimes I can’t resist.

 

Other people love him as well,

And I think he’s a bit of a player

If you know what I mean.

 

Every time I look at him,

I fall in love all over again.

All of that leather and metal covering his body.

It makes me want to be with him

Even just thinking about it.

 

When we are together,

We are the cutest couple!

We work so well together,

It’s easy to see our connection.

 

When people see us together,

They stop and stare.

They are just jealous,

That they can’t do what we do together.

 

We make all of this love,

And then spew it out to the world.

This love is so musical,

Who doesn’t love it?

 

I’ll still be thinking of you babe,

But he’ll be the one in my arms.

He loves it in my arms,

And I love just holding him.

 

Damn, girl.

I’m so sorry,

But I’m falling in love with

My saxophone. 

© 2011 GlamGirl


Author's Note

GlamGirl
Coming from a 14 year old girl who just decided that she was going to minor in music, this is how I'm thinking right now =P
I spent the weekend playing in a senior band (I'm a freshman) and it's given me so much musical inspiration. Our conductor talked about college a lot, because almost everyone there was a senior. My band teacher also thinks I'm brilliant because I auditioned into a senior band as a freshman haha.

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Um hmm, you are a witty girl. Ending is unexpected *laughs* and yet it fits. Anyone who knows girls interest in music would know the connection one has when drawn by the sweet notes of a seXiPhone. "There's just something about that tune that makes your emotions flutter" may be a possible thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well I knew it was about an instrument just didn't know it was a sax. Of course with the underlying tone I should have made that connection. Very well done Glamorous even. I liked reading this a lot.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was so nice...
i loved it so much :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


bery nice
and well written.
this is wow; funny ending
~Amai

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent poem... and hehe saxophone :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A like the way you told this poem. Allow the reader to fall in the very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bwahahahahahahahahha!!!!! Just like the chocolate fountain!!! I remember how hard me, paige and the reat of us were laughing when Mrs. Hill read us that one! I really liked it! halfway through I was thinking "wait.... it this gonna be like the chocolate fountain one?" and it was! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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