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Easter Blessing


A Poem by Natalie Lozano
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I was thinking of my mom who passed last year. And this poem poured right out of me.
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Walking in the green grass. The wind stirs the flowers around me and the petals go flying in the breeze.
 
My cloak answers the wind as it swirls around me. I raise my face to the sun and feel the breeze.
 
As my bare feet relish the coolness of the grass. There up ahead a bright pink egg is hiding.
 
Putting it in my basket. I move on in search of more.
 
Then a little girl with a bright smile and dark eyes runs to me. Mommy mommy!!
 
Look I found a Yeyo one.  She holds up a brightly colred Yellow egg.
 
Yes u did good job. Her smile makes me smile and my eyes hold back tears.
 
I look up “doesn’t she look lovely mom”. A ray of sunlight beams down on us and the wind stirs my daughter’s hair.
 
I know she sees us the nana in heaven. I grab my daughters hand and continue to look for eggs.
 
Smiling as tears roll down my cheeks. As I remember last year when my mom was still with us.
 
Then up ahead I find a garden of sweetpeas. And I hear “sweet peas for my sweet pea” on the wind.
 
Her nickname for her grandchild. Taking a picture of her amidst the flowers in every color.
 
Happy Easter mom! And I hear in a little voice beside me Happy Easter Nana!
 
Grabbing her in a fierce hug. I am reminded I’m blessed. 
 

Natalie Lozano


© 2008 Natalie Lozano



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Author's Note

I'm not realy worried about grammar on this one. I just want opinions.
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Hi there natalie,

Thanks for your kind comments on Creations. I enjoyed Easter blessing for several reasons the first being your metaphor ability "Such as your cloak answers the wind" , your feet relishing the grass.

What I liked most of all was your overall interaction with nature and your ability to overcome the past and luxuriate in the here and now.

I have another web page if you want to go and have a look. The first song on the play list is mine and you'll find the lyrics there as well.

http://constancewrites.ning.com/profile/DavidLonsdale

Hope to hear from you again.

All the best to you and your family.

Imagedden

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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