u.

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A Poem by gogi7

Venom so deadly 
so seductive,
you must've known
you choose to ignore
your duplicity,
Oh,how ruthless 
and administering, 
Stop it,
i disapprove,
i don't want it 
no more, 

Another you, 

Aiming at me,
you took full charge
no mercy 
no regret,
you tore and tore 
at the
kindness and
vulnerability, 
no excuse or fuse 
could allow me to leave. 

So i stayed alongside

Those seductive curves,
Gentle
Inviting
No i must stay away, 
No i must stay,
its so soothing,
so gentle,
wait there's 
an imperfection
So i part,

A lie in a dream,

I can't withstand
such warmth radiating out of such
elegance,
such an angle, 
even if it is elusive,

No,

I must
part from such beauty,
the pain 
the anguish 
oh why
do i love you

More venom,

Stop it you must,
a breeze is here
let it take you or me.
You as far as the heavens
and i to suffer that of hades 
just so that i may
suppress what my heart longs for.

But will it allow
peace,

No,
unless
the lie in a dream
was adapted
to reality,

Snap,
the truth has stumbled in
unwelcome, 

Even worlds part
can not cease me from forgetting you,
No, you are there imprinted
in my veins
in my thoughts and 
in my actions.

Oh, your everywhere,

Go now enjoy the brightness, 
warmth 
and company of heaven
while i continue to wither, 
just as i did next to 
you.

G.E

© 2011 gogi7


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This is remarkable work...so well conveyed and wonderfully thought out xx

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Wonderful piece,great writing,keep it coming!!

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NICE PIECE!!! I love it.....

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This is a really fine writing...Like the last stanza... :)))

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This was so great
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