Blown Away

An amazed girl sees a feather in the wind.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Frappant billowy auras
Caress delicate ivory wisps
Eclipsing limp meager stem
Akin masked lunar hide

Reminiscent of golden fronds
And imputed mahogany scepter
Acquiescently plying fiercely
 
Chimerical zephyrs wholly ecstatic
Lure serene debonair touch
Veritable tawny cane replica
Convoy to petty saffron strands
 
Trinket plethora aberrantly trifling
Chalky disarray in demeanor
Be winged entity remnant
Manifesting pure ebony contrast
 
Enraptured heart from upheaval
(Electrifying ambient spectacle
Blows away outright assemblage)
Once in a blue moon
Derives zeal prevailing a twink
 
She shelters enamored soul atop
Draped by breathtaking awe
Lingering prior petite plumage
Instigating colossal odyssey
 
Her sweet brown hazelnuts
Behold dainty white epitome
Framed impeccable and forsaken
Upon brilliant sapphire milieu
Eternally unhindered fringes
Unknown to terrestrial eyes
 
All emerge picturesque
Beguiling youthful psyche
 
"Dear feather
My enlightened essence coheres
Eminently your roving cadence
Divulging raw mirthfulness
An echo for gay vehemence
En masse you with me
Blazon much prevalently!"
Ophelia cries

Reviews

[Koda Demitri Tucker-Elr..]

Wow. I guess you could say I was "blown away" by this!! Lol. Play on words WIN.

Anyhow, you've created a magical story here. I like all of it. Every single word.

[Becky C Strukamp]

An amazing write, you penned it beautifully.

[Marie Harrison]

Magical poetry!

[PoppySilver]

Absolutely stunning! I am literally speechless..apt title for how I feel after reading this! xx

[Thrinna Mae]

Wow! Filled with blue! I like this...Good poem! :)

[Raven Starhawk]

I love this. It is not confusing to me at all. In fact to me it makes perfect sense.

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

Brilliant work, and great use of form, a well crafted piece indeed.