Nothing

another senryu...hopefully I've improved!

~I feel like nothing

When I'm lost in a moment

And the world goes by~

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

I know that feeling only too well. Blink and its gone! Nice
!

[Rachel EFitzgerald]

am intrigued by just short pieces and just looked up the meaning of a 'senryu' and 'haiku'...am understanding more now :) thanks for what I've learned today :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome :)

[Amanda]

Very deep. I am sure we all feel like this sometimes.

[Elisa Laura]

~ I see you sitting
Behind that blue window pale
watching the nice world ~

But yet... you captured
An beautiful 5-7-5 Senryu,
And made the Netherlands happy :)

So you reach always out of there ;)

Great job again...


E.L.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

haha...really clever

thank you!

[Deeper La'jik]

Those unforgettable moments that are profoundly deep and give meaning to life

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

I feel like something when I read good poems.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

thanx for your review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[nicolettox]

it's quite hard to convey and abstract thought like "to feel like nothing", yet you've succeeded. The world moves very fast for those who, like poets, can and need to stop for a while to contemplate beauty. Thank you for your words.

[Michael G.]

Nothing but nothing, happens when one stands alone... pondering nothing.
Or is that thought true? When time flies and the earth moves...in spite of ourselves.
Thoughtfully written.

[Reflectus]

Deep meanings in those words. Sometimes it's hard to keep up with the fast paced-ness of the world, and it affects our minds. The picture is totally beautiful, completely relevant to the scene you've painted with your words. So much conveyed in so less words, skillfully.