The Perfect Kiss

The Perfect Kiss

A Poem by Isabelle Faye
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This is written for someone very special. Although I know it probably won't, I wish with all my heart that this will happen some day.

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I lay next to you,

My eyes locked with yours.

 

You gaze down at me,

Your hand gently stroking my hair.

 

“You’re beautiful.” You tell me.

Your voice is as soft and gentle as a light spring breeze.

 

I blush,

A warm pink color spreads across my face.

 

“I adore it when you blush.” You say,

Moving your hand to caress my cheek.

 

I place my hand over yours,

Letting the feeling of your warmth seep into my skin.

 

“You’re perfect.” I tell you.

“I love you.”

 

“I love you too my angel.” You reply.

I want to stay like this forever.

 

You lean down slowly,

I close my eyes.

 

My heart speeds up, pounding against my chest like a trapped bird.

I feel your amazing, soft lips come in contact with mine.

 

I am flying.

You make me feel a way no one has before.

 

It is an amazing, entrancing, intoxicating feeling.

I feel safe, warm, protected, loved.

 

I kiss you back,

I never want this kiss to end.

 

As you pull away,

I open my eyes.

 

I gaze into your wonderful hazel eyes,

A wide smile taking over my face.

 

You smile back at me,

And in this moment everything in the world seems right.

 

I love you and you love me and everything will be okay.

I love you my treasure.

I love you.

You are amazing.

 

 

 

© 2012 Isabelle Faye


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It's a beautiful poem, jealously aware of how gorgeous the company in the poem is, and after reading the quote from your profile page...... I was worried that something dark was going to destroy this beautiful moment I didn't too much want to admit to receiving!! lol I love it..... still, jealously aware of beautiful and perfect this moment COULD be if it were to happen this way. Great job!! Beautiful Belle. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you like the poem. I am struggling through some dark times right now but the person I wrote.. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

Then, enjoy all those little moments that lead to those beautiful things you speak of. Don't plan ou.. read more



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So beautiful *_____*

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is just a random thought nothing about this piece in particular. Always let the rhythm of the words flow without any resistance. You are a very good writer and have great rhythm. Just remember to trust it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

Thank you. You're right that I usually don't trust myself when I rhyme and I tend to stay away from.. read more
It's a beautiful poem, jealously aware of how gorgeous the company in the poem is, and after reading the quote from your profile page...... I was worried that something dark was going to destroy this beautiful moment I didn't too much want to admit to receiving!! lol I love it..... still, jealously aware of beautiful and perfect this moment COULD be if it were to happen this way. Great job!! Beautiful Belle. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you like the poem. I am struggling through some dark times right now but the person I wrote.. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

Then, enjoy all those little moments that lead to those beautiful things you speak of. Don't plan ou.. read more
I went through a trying time about a year and half ago. I met a lady that made me feel the emotions that you expressed. I was moved by the expressions and the emotional freedom in their sentiments.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad that you like the poem.
This is such an amazing poem. It was perfectly written. This special someone is so lucky to have you. It made me feel like the kiss was so real. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isabelle Faye

11 Years Ago

Thank you. No, on the contrary, I am lucky to have him. I guess that he and I are lucky to have each.. read more

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Added on November 19, 2012
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Isabelle Faye
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Hi! My pen name is Isabelle Faye but you can call me Isabelle or Belle for short. I'm an under 18 year old writer from the United States. I write both poetry and books/novels but the latter tend to pr.. more..

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