Without You

 Losing someone you love

 Tests who we are made of

 We are vulnerable and afraid

 It's the decisions that were made 

 

 Without you I feel like a fool

 Without you the world is cruel

 I can't do anything at all

 It was pride before the fall

 

 It's so hard now just to breathe

 My feelings inside seem to seethe

 You're my one and only relief

 From this ever present grief

 

 Without you I feel like a fool

 Without you the world is cruel

 I can't do anything at all

 It was pride before the fall

 

 

Author's Note

This is about my recent break up with my boyfriend. I am over this grief...but I had to get it out

Reviews

[Cheryl J. Turner]

I'm sorry to hear about your break-up, though it seems it was a long time ago...
This was a very expressive piece. Wonderfully written, though very sad.