16.Revisit love

Poem n video by pal. You fall in love; Fall out of it at times;Matter of heart truly; Not for minds play.

 

Revisit love

 

You fall in love

Fall out of it at times

Matter of heart truly

Not for minds play

 

Lucky are the ones

Live through love

Crossing many miles

Supporting each other

 

Loving the ones

In blood relation

The strongest binding

Part of creation plan

 

 Partners join along

But when there is love

Every meeting is lively

Bring more meaning to life

 

Friend’s love stays longer

Stronger than all others

For friendship builds

On mutual freedom

 

Personal space

Allows each one

Free minds choice

No clash or trespass

 

Margins the space

Allowed everywhere

For the will of others

Life is coexistence

 

All fail on margins

Trespass each time every time

Hurting One and all

Breaking relations

 

Visit your love again

This time don’t

Magnify others faults

Cause it’s their margin

 

Pal

Poem n video by pal

32.Revisit love

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s1khMayDqRQ

Poem by pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

38.Re-visit love (Возвращение к любви) - in Ruski 

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by kamelia, Bulgaria

33.Re-visit love (Преоткрий любовта) - in Bulgarski 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlfBSZTnNtc

 

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

I've always thought that there are two sides to every story and that personal space is extremely important in a relationship...especially in the bathroom! You have crafted this beautifully and truthfully. All the problem areas are covered.
"Lucky are the ones...live through love" This needs a connecting word like; who or that...
Terrific work...Cheers.

[Yaooooooo]

I hear you man, you tend to focus on the negative and forget what was the reason why we fell in love in the first place.
Why spend all that energy focusing on the bad and all that when wrong, when we can focus on all the good times and the beauty of the person infront of us...
Thanks for the request and keep them coming, look forward to reading more in the future...
One!

[Tania Leigh]

The last stanza sums up the preceding ones perfectly, and it is so true....great write!

[Charlotte Marie]

Excellent read! Beautifully penned! You can really feel the heart poured into this one! Great job! Thanks for sharing! Charley

[Pema Dorje]

... and the Love that universal comprehension brings, a compassion like no other and not limited by Human affection or Animal pack instinct ... does not differentiate in any way, that's the way to really play ...

[Chillbear Latrigue]

I like the concept and I like what you had to say. The meter was difficult for me. I am not a poet and in reading poems, I often wonder if I have the rhythm of the words right. I liked what you had to say here.

[SM Davis]

This reads like a stream of consciousness. I like the way that you did each stanza as a separate thought yet tying it all together at the end. This was good. I liked it!

[C. Harter Amos]

Setting margins in a relationship is of utmost importance. Maintaining individuality has to apply to both partners, but seldom seems to work out that way. It's wonderful when it does though!

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I was once told that love is never having to say you're sorry....
Im still not sure on that one, and I still don't know if love is truly all that it is cracked up to be...but it is a nice warm fuzzy feeling in the pit of the stomach...

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

this is an amazing peom - i love it -- and what perfect timing i read it today -- as these are actually words that i needed to hear -- especially the "magnify others faults, cause it's their margin" lines --

thanks

[John Stussy]

I hope that my significant other and I can experience that kind of love. :) Your piece gives me even fresher hope of it. Thank you.