18.Wish being happy

18.Wish being happy

A Poem by pal
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Poem N Video by Pal. Happiness a birth right;Yet, all far from it!;You may have all;The riches of the world;Many with you loving;Yet remain miserable; "Happiness is a state of mind".

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 Wish being happy

 

All want to be happy

Of course, at all times

Happiness a birth right

Yet, all far from it!

 

Starting day at school

Unhappy child

Crying amongst unknowns

Missing love, hurt most

 

Soon friends made

Child giggle inside

Eagerly wait

School open again

 

Love thrills adults

Hand in hand, gentle kiss

Restless for more

Memories linger

 

Marriage can’t wait

A child come soon

Make all smiles

Connecting hearts

 

More money, new car

Bigger home, world travel

Reaching mountains peaks

Vain searches for happiness

 

You may have all

The riches of the world

Many with you loving

Yet remain miserable

 

A win make you happy

Leaves you happier

Making others win

 “Happiness is a state of mind”

 

Small ‘i’ the self ID Ego

Desire, pride, anger, delusion,

Greed, jealousy, lust and hatred

Act as obstacles to tranquility

 

 

Ego separates individuals 

Happier you are sharing

You are not alone

But part of totality

 

Happiness and sadness

Are sides of same coin

In life’s voyage the path

Individual connecting unity

 

Pal

Poem n video by Pal

20.Wish being happy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbMiqLuilZI

 

Poem by Pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

30.Wish being happy (В ОЖИДАНИИ СЧАСТЬЯ) - in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmT6DCL3jPQ

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by kamelia, Bulgaria

31.Wish being happy (Копнеж за щастие) - in Bulgarski 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjiMYYUGXjM

 

 

© 2008 pal


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Yes happiness is a stateof mind and we all search for those moments to be in that stae. Nice write. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.

Posted 15 Years Ago


You hit the nail right on the head here about happiness... it's a state of mind and when your down just look around ane realize there are people worse off than you but still enjoy life... afterall it's too short to wast on misery!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite beautiful, poem and video. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

everyone wants to be happy but can a person even achieve such a goal? in this poem you say that its a state of mind and i agree with you completely. this is a very moving piece and really makes the reader think. great job!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yea I agree with Tania...happiness can not be bought. The illusion of happiness can be bought, though those who in that sort of false world tend to be miserable asses. This is nice work here. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Money can't buy true happiness, as it comes from within. Life is a struggle to keep the negative emotions at bay, which take happiness away from us in degrees...

Very thought-provoking poem :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, you said it: happiness is a state of mind. One can find happiness only within oneself. Important piece. Loved it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess the whole moving images poetry is the thing to do.
I found the poem interesting, overall it was good.
Make us think, that all the rich people out there are not fully happy, we can buy just about everything in life but not happines. Look at all the spoil hollywood brats, and think about how much their lifes suck...
Happyness is not something you can buy...
One!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think everyone wants happiness... today i was at a 2 year olds birthday party... i was happy (as was all the other guests) when i got there but that soon faded... as the mom of the child started belittling her husband in front of everyone...

another great video to accompany the poem... nicely done :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is an odd piece of writing... one that certainly makes one think about happiness and what it is that we call happiness or seek. happiness is an individual thing... what works for one person is not going to work for someone else. you pull up good questions. this was a bit hard to read as there seemed to be a meter, but then maybe not.

a very thoughtful piece for sure....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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