Standing in Rain

Its just another flow of my emotions

Standing in rain,

Waiting for your come,

Crying alone loud,

But you never come

 

IS this all I had,

Or the things that I did,

Was all I lie,

That picked me to end

 

Everything that I saw,

Was in my destiny,

Or in my blind faith,

That I made a mistake

 

Everything around me,

Surrounded by your smell,

Have lost all its fragrance,

That once had a shell

 

Standing in rain,

I always ask myself,

I was destined for it,

Or it was a blind faith!!!!!!

 

Author's Note

All sort of reviews are welcomed!!!!!

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

standing in the rain is very soothing though...
but in this case rain ...waiting teares you apart
blind faith is the word which stops me from
imagining anything else...
Blind faith is quite natural in this type of world...
but loosing that faith breaks you...
nice poem though...keep writing:)

[voices]

Remove the I in your poetic endeavours

[sushi]

Its true. It hurts to miss some1.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, great poem, very nice

[Richard Williams]

Rain seems to work in the poems as backdrop for the bleeding of grief, for tears and questions. Nicely expressed, but it would be more effective without the eps. Blind Faith was a band but as a motive tool, you may as well walk on quicksand.

[Art]

interesting...a nice work of emotional release...through poetry

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe most of us will walk in the rain. Waiting for no-one to come. I like the poem. I like the vision you create with your words. Last lines are true.
"I always ask myself,
I was destined for it,
Or it was a blind faith!!!!!"
Blind faith is the only thing we can hold on to sometime. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

To me rain can cleans the soul as it does the atmosphere... nice flow of emotions.

[Emilee Grimm]

Rain is such a beautiful thing and certainly can remind us of things that hurt to think about. Nice poem, keep up the good work!!!

[Dream Weaver]

So distressing the matters of the heart,
blind faith broken love makes you want
to relinquish all that is truly real…