Do I have or don't??????

Do I have or don't??????

A Poem by lavina k.
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I want an answer that do i have the right to live on my own...or will i have to take back and do what i m destined for????

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Do I have the right

Or don't have the right????

To be happy whenever I want..

To be there wherever I want..

And to think whatever I want..

 

I have failed to the cease of understanding,

The things which have been so annoying.

 

Now I want to break this free,

The world of dramatics and of plea.

 

Happiness take its own count,

Often brings with some wounds.

 

Do I have the right to show

The love and pleasure to glow?????

Do I have the right to dance

To mingle with every trance?????

Do I have the right to smile

To giggle beyond mile?????

 

Do I have the right to live

Or don't have the right to swing?????
















© 2010 lavina k.



Author's Note

lavina k.
I would love if you feel it, though i never felt as if to kill myself or so, but those bad feelings made me to write this...
Please do review!!!!!

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Every person should be able to dreams and reach for their goals. No-one should stop a dream. I like the strength in this poem. People who world is controlled and dreams are killed. We become just robots. A strong ending. You made your point. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The choice of pics and fonts are good but would wish that you do not get into tangles such as this one. Introspect and settle your emotions for emotions of the rest around you it would lead to great poetry

Posted 5 Years Ago


Great job. You have the right to do whatever you want at least you should.

Posted 6 Years Ago


yes you have the right to live own your own...
we all do feel this way at some point in life...
Ending life ..your existance just for the fact that
you have a temporary problem doesn't solve your problem...you can dream your dreams...fight for it till the end..
good poem:)
Akshat

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rights emotively manifested, powerfully ended.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rights never matter when you have the will to things.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You do have the right to do everything you want :)
This is such a beautiful write :)
Good job on this :)
-Sweets

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

everyone must make choices and until we are there within that questioning of decisions it is there where we find out who we are...best wishes...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's not a question of having a right to do something,
it's more like having the will and ambition to make
yourself happy and fulfilled. Depression and a feeling
of hopelessness tends to bring on irrational thoughts.
Sometimes we act on these impulses prematurely.
Ending ones life is a permanent solution to a temporary
Problem…


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah!! A beautiful write indeed...
we all surely do feel this way at some point in life..but the fact is just that we have to keep dreaming..we have to keep moving on..because life goes on..and even after many struggles there are happy times..
thanks for sharing..
Vaishali ^_^

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Every person should be able to dreams and reach for their goals. No-one should stop a dream. I like the strength in this poem. People who world is controlled and dreams are killed. We become just robots. A strong ending. You made your point. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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lavina k.
lavina k.

jaipur, India



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