The Truth

The Truth

A Story by lavina k.
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Just a heart breaking truth of a lover's past!!!!!!

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I was walking as if nobody has seen me,suddenly some thing choked my throat and I frown as if someone giggled at me saying"you are a looser???"

I was pulled back to my thoughts again, and then I realized

"Where I'm??? What I'm doing????

From where I was coming????"

I walked for so long, being not in my senses I reached on a highway.

I cried again as if no one has seen me though, I cried aloud, I cried loud, I cried…

Remembering the time…

He was there right in front of me in a mall, there I told myself "I will forgive him for his wrong deeds, for all the lies, and for all the truths(he made) to be with me"…

I was so happy, but as I took my first step…

There I saw a girl besides him…and gone to flashback of memories...

How he ditched me…how he broke my heart…how he left me for some other girl and I stood there seeing his face when he said that "loving me was just a game..."

I remembered all the scenes of my past and of my present times…how we were and how he was and what he made me????

I cried loud pleading from my soul to kill his soul,kept in mine and to move on…

That day THE TRUTH of my heart came to confront my mind and stabilized all my thoughts without him in it...


© 2011 lavina k.



Author's Note

lavina k.
Every person is loved by someone....but that doesn't mean if you love someone, the same person loves you too....
You can't make that person loves you until you have promised yourself to make them love you or they somehow respect your love!!!

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'I cried loud pleading from my soul to kill his soul,kept in mine and to move on…
That day THE TRUTH of my heart came to confront my mind and stabilized all my thoughts without him in it...'

yah! i love the ending, great way to tie up something like that

i can totally relate too, and if one person relates to your writing im sure other people will too

if it was longer, id almost think of it as a slam poetry :P
nice

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love and infatuation are two different aspects which tend to get blurred at times. The truth is that love is two way

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lavina
A vry good piece of work. You need to have a lot of emotions brning inside u to cmpose smthin like this.

Only thing i would like to say it was more of a poem than a story newayzzzzz itzzzzz butifullll.....
keep up the good work

Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'I cried loud pleading from my soul to kill his soul,kept in mine and to move on…
That day THE TRUTH of my heart came to confront my mind and stabilized all my thoughts without him in it...'

yah! i love the ending, great way to tie up something like that

i can totally relate too, and if one person relates to your writing im sure other people will too

if it was longer, id almost think of it as a slam poetry :P
nice

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

truth in love at times is an untruth...why? that is a question so many ask...the emotional impact of love can be very joyfull and it can be sad...nice work on this poem...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intense. And very emotional. Its a very complex yet real life thing that you can need someone without being needed yourself. One sided feelings hurt, I agree. But be strong. If the one who left u in pieces thought "loving you was just a game", he wasn't worth the time OR love. His absence just made more room for someone better in life who respects your feelings.
Great write. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was sadly beautiful :( all we can do is move on and hope to find a better happiness within...

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aawwww!!! so innocent writing!! :)) luvd th way it is framed!! seet n beautiful full of calmness!!
superlike!!
but may i knw for whom is ths entire thing framed!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If someone care for you. They would never try to hurt to you. Anyone who abuse a kind heart need to be kept at a far distance away. A sad and strong poem. Sometime better to be alone then trying to love a heartless person. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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lavina k.

jaipur, India



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I am a person who is completely new in this World of writing your Expressions. I love the way life holds all of us in its hands, and it shows how we are entangled in the power of time. Sometimes lif.. more..

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