Have Faith in Me

Tragedy has consumed your life

And the pain tears into your soul

You try to run and hide from it

But i can see it in your eyes 

I know your life is hard and tiresome

And things seem to never go your way

So i want to be there for you

Please let me stay

When i ask you whats wrong

You smile and say nothing 

But i can sense the anguish you have

And you make me worry

My thoughts are always with you

I try to tell you that

But when attempt to tell you my feelings

You always turn your back

I hate it when you cringe away

Away from the reality of the matter

I want to be there for you

So why push me even further?

I wish you would talk to me

Tell me everything thats making you suffer

I will keep your dear secrets

I'm not like the others

So please, my friend

Have faith in me

Because when you hurt, as do i 

I just want to make you happy

Your pain is mine, please let me help you. I promise to never tell a soul the secrets that you keep dear. I don't want to lose some one like you again... 

  

Author's Note

This is for my friend who is having a hard time right now. He is lost and I want to help him. I haven't talked to him in a while, and I'm worried. Though I doubt he will ever see this, i just wanted to get out how i felt.

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

Very emotional and beautiful. It was a great joy to have read.

[Emunah June.]

Your friends sounds lucky to know someone as kindhearted as you. :)

[Katannaism]

I love the emotion here! It's so beautifully written- Very good. Love it!

[Daydreamer54]

Aw, what a beautiful poem! i like how poetic and seweet it sounds! Awesome write! for some reason it reminds me of the song "Won't let go." by Rascal flatts and it reminds me of my book Teen Exile! Awesome job on this! :)

[Alexis]

This poem had a lot of emotion in it. Amazing. I think I can partially relate to what has been said here. I hope there's an end to your friend's suffering soon and that you don't have to worry as much. I can imagine how painful it would be for you, too; not just him.
Anyways, like I said, this poem was really emotional. It came from your heart. When you explain exactly how you're feeling through poetry, the outcome is usually really great; as you've displayed with this piece. Wonderful job. Keep on writing. :) God bless you; I'm sure you're an incredible friend.

[Angela]

Beautiful poem. Good to have a friend like you. Sometimes people are so scarred it hardens there hearts or it causes such immense anger and it is hard to tell who is a real friend. Persist, but gently.

[chaffy]

this was a sorrowful poem, but i really liked it at the same time. it really shows the way you feel and your care for your friend, i hope the situation gets better and that your friend will feel better. :)

[~Lizzy♬]

That's very emotional, but also very sad. It's great that you care for this friend so much, great job!

~Lizzy~