Death Grip

Death Grip

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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for beautiful you ;)

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Death Grip


standing i stumble
whole skin; fingers
a live neuronal volcano

you show me heart to soul
i see your eyes in twinkling dimpled smile
your words spill me over plates and tables

love puddles i never would have known
always a little off balance
the way drunken monkies dance and fight

roll me over washing waves
embrace me in your death grip
who am i to quip?

while worlds fall asunder
a chance to taste your lips
willingly go i

four corners agree
as blind men want to see
brings you into focus

hear my rag tale plea
kill me slowly
kill me please! :)

7/21/14


© 2014 Einstein Noodle



Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
for all the negative things that can happen on social media .. sometimes the wonderment of positive relationships happen :)


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Such a romantic, you are, E :) Your words "spilled me over plates and tables" What a beautifully unique expression!!! WOW :) You are a sweet man and an amazing artist, my friend.

And E...I hope your holidays are full of love and laughter (((you)))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you so much lynn! your comments mean a lot to me .. glad you found this one :) and all the lov.. read more
This is a great piece Einstein.. wow the spill me over plates and tables was exquisite.. a line to remember.. hehe wow this is a great, fun, imagery a ten and it moves and has a sing song quality to it I like too]
great write

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

thank you Violet! so glad you like it .. your remarks are very encouraging to me .. thank you again .. read more
our words spill me over plates and tables. Love that line

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

hi TL .. i like that line too! .. this poem was inspired by beautiful Frieda .. she is quite the mus.. read more
that was very impressive, i loved how you expressed your desire to be dead at the end, and you are asking your soul to be taken, that was very great work , you've done that well :) i loved it

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

wow! thank you stars! i appreciate your visit and your comments are important to me .. thank you aga.. read more
stars are far

3 Years Ago

its always my pleasure .
The drunken monkies' fight and dance sounded very charming, indeed! :p love the last stanza! But I must admit the monkies stole the show....

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

hi Moon's fairest! thank you for visiting and taking time to comment ... i am glad the monkey line g.. read more
What an amazing poem, Einstein. I actually loved this one to pieces and the title hooked me.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

Kayleigh!!! thank you thank you thank you!!! i am so glad you like this one .. i will take a chance .. read more
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Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i hear you ... it is about the death grip of love ...;)
E.
Cryingkate

3 Years Ago

Is there really any negative from it? Or Was?
Is there a wonderful lesson from it?
All.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

noooooooo nothing negative .. its a welcomed grip .. squeeeeeeeeeeeze me, come on and squezeme like .. read more
I read this one two weeks ago but I found it in my RR list today so I decided to give it another go-around, and have dialed into it much deeper than I did that first time...there are so many cool things going on in this piece, I don't know where to start...I've broken a lot of plates in the past but not from the effect of a twinkling smile if you get my drift...thankfully I've gotten a little better at reeling my emotions in haha I guess that doesn't have much to do with the poem, but it brought that image to mind so I thought I might as well put it down...I like the drunken monkeys, it's one of the many unique images you've packed into this piece...I also like it when a poet can throw the odd rhyme into a piece of free verse, something I try to do myself on a regular basis...I think it adds another dynamic to the poem...even when the world is falling apart, a comforting woman has a way of putting everything in order...this is hardly a rag tale my friend...awesome work :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

you are a gracious man Kubla ... didn't send requests to begin with but wanted reactions from some t.. read more
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

No bother at all my friend, I'm glad I got to see it again...it's also one of my own faves from your.. read more

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