"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

"
Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      


© 2016 Einstein Noodle



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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

10 Months Ago

STILL love this collaboration, brings back the way things were, the influence that special person ha.. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

i missed your comment of 2 months ago! hmmm .. computers right!? so glad this brings you such fond m.. read more
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much... still miss my friend with the curled pinky and language that knew, knows, no bo.. read more



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Mastering poetry is what you do. thanks for this nice piece.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

Roxane! how very nice to meet you ..thank you for finding this one .. it is my favorite collaboratio.. read more
love this... it is typical Frieda, and i wondered why she wasn't here when i came back. She was a great poet with a wonderful sense of humour, a shame there is often so much nastiness on this site

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

you know...i have pretty much not experienced much of it ...but Freida sure did ..and whatever it wa.. read more
I often think of Frieda, so came, looking forward to read your collaboration which is all I expected and more. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

yesterday along the side of the page i was reading ...where poetry suggested reading is .. i saw one.. read more
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

You are most welcome. It was such a pleasure. Thank you for sharing :)
Are you one of the wonderful people spreading the BS rumor that I am the troll that drove this Frieda person away? Every couple of months I get a message or two from freshly created fake profiles (usually by John McFayden, ANTO (now tony Jordan), or Wordman) with some wonderful suggestions on how I should kill myself over "trolling" this Frieda person off the site. Which is the epitome of hypocrisy since that is the same thing they claim to be against. Anyway, it would be odd if you were, since we are generally pretty cordial in our limited interactions. But IF you are one of those awesome people spreading that nonsense about me it'd be great if you stopped. I've never once interacted with that person and am pretty sure she was gone before I got here so that accusation is completely irrational and based on unrelated sour grapes. Nice poem by the way.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

I have stayed out of the who in all that occured with Frieda ..until she tells me herself i remain f.. read more
Dead Alive Dave

2 Months Ago

Hmmm.... I will chose to believe you but in all honesty, it's not a natural feeling. I don't think.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

OK :( sorry to hear that but certainly respect your decision ..just let me know if you change your m.. read more
“made a date for half past daft” I loved that line! Great collaboration. The imagery and movement of the piece rather put me in mind of the surreal stylings of some of David Bowie’s work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

you, as so many, point to that line among the rest .. of course it is Frieda's .. her being the reas.. read more
MomzillaNC

3 Months Ago

You’re welcome. And, thanks, good to connect with you again as well.
Excellent piece. It has a John Lennon meets Lewis Carroll feel to it, with a hint of David Bowie. I can't, in all honesty, find anything to criticise. It's elegant, surreal and faintly disturbing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

thanks for visiting and the thorough sensitive review ... your words are very encouraging and i will.. read more
I did not know why Ms. Frieda left, so that brought me a measure of sadness to know it was a fool who might well not even linger here. But your words, your collab, shows the beauty and brilliance of words and thoughts flowing together from two magnificent streams. Wondrous.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

oh thank you Owl! i smile smile smile in remembrances of Frieda every time someone finds and reviews.. read more
Holy, my eyes could not land on a spot to keep focus on... The rabbit hole of blended words and stylistic bravado... Scaramouch...? Whatever this word means... I am stealing it... Haha... Elegantly penned...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Silente

4 Months Ago

Friggin' trolls, man... Gah, ruining the internet and daily bubble of lifes grime wherever they go.... read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

i am sure she is ..God bless you Silente .. all day every day :)
Silente

4 Months Ago

Ditto, EN, stay safe...!
I love this poem and am so sorry the collaboration was interrupted! Love the whimsy - shades of Lewis Carrol! "Spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd"-great line! Great free- flow. Beautiful!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

thank you so much Annette! so happy you enjoyed this collaboration ... i am glad to have met you tod.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

4 Months Ago

The pleasure is all mine! And happy to meet you too!

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