"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

I don't know how i missed this from you, Emma .. i wish she would come back too .. and read how we a.. read more
emmajoygreen

6 Months Ago

Today, 29/08/2023 and still miss Freida. Such a character, a little wicked and absolutely special. .. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

Em, your comment touches my heart .. yes .. she was just a little wicked and so full of spunk and jo.. read more



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A fantastical romp flowing with abundant imagination.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

thank you my new found friend! Frieda left an imprint here at the Cafe' ... we had fun writing this .. read more
Anita Frader

1 Month Ago

You're welcome 😊


Working backwards, as I am occasionally want to do .. i have just revisited two of my favouwrite collaborations ever .. and get this .. Have now just found my third, which just so happens to be my most favouwriest of them all .. How I managed to miss out on this one for the last 10 .. Yes TEN whole years is beyond me .. unless I have been dreaming the whole time .. Truly truly magical and priceless ink spilt so bloomin well by your good self Mr. E .. and that partner of yours whom I still think about a lot and miss such a lot .. p.s I just hit the rating rectangle so hard, I swear I saw x3 zero's for a moment .. Neville


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

your the best Neville ... i am sure our dear friend hears you .. i still think of and miss, her as w.. read more
Neville

1 Month Ago


My absolute and sincerest pleasure Mr, Noodle sir & I sure hope she does xoxo is for her, ju.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

ahahaha! :))))))))) of course they are for her! that spicey Italian poetess.
Very surreal. Great work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

pleased to meet you Mr. T! it's an oldie written with a very spicy Italian .. Miss Freda .. glad you.. read more
Colorful rainbows you created writing this poem. Good work 👍

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

thanks for taking time Arundass! I appreciate it!
E.
This poem, "Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land," is a captivating and thought-provoking exploration of the psychedelic experience. The use of vivid imagery and poetic language creates a dreamlike atmosphere that draws the reader in and leaves them feeling both enchanted and unsettled. The poem's exploration of altered consciousness through the use of psychedelic mushrooms is both fascinating and thought-provoking, and the use of rhyme and absurdity in the language adds a sense of playfulness and whimsy to the piece. The poem's themes of transformation and rebirth are explored in a way that is both powerful and accessible, making this a poem that is sure to resonate with readers. Overall, "Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" is a beautifully written and thoroughly engaging poem that is well worth reading.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

here you are blessing Frieda and I ... it was such a fun collaboration with her ... thank you again .. read more
Time for a new post from one Einstein Noodle. ~Sharon

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

thanks so much Miss Sharon ... I do appreciate that .. I have lacked passion and inspiration now for.. read more
Interesting imagery in this one. As my alternative reality agent is limited to two glasses of red per day, I shall probably not behold such sights.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

well .. if dear Freida would please come back .. she would take you there in a line or two .. no pro.. read more
This read like a fun poetic fairy tale. A fine collaboration.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

we had so much fun writing it together ... Freida is much missed here at the Cafe' ... by many and a.. read more
I loved how you played with words here. Definitely a trip down a Rabbit hole.

I enjoyed the trip.

Scott

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Scott!
E.

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