i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(
Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land
Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy, to see if the rabbit hole was rumor curiouser and curiouser about the unimaginable avenue,
She opens my mind and fear grips my colors from the hinterland ..... tremors wink and blink and nod
As I sat upon my newfangled gumption common sense took a recess, spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd to my surprise, the scaramouch of a head talked back
my birthing in darkness musk and dank scent knocks my shroom head explodes collide's scope intense
in his elegant persuasion, made a date for half past daft took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip alas, we've lived happily ever after upon a prime floating island in a cloud
clouds of words spilling like rough gouged stones in tumbler's majestic insane forever now i
What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!
There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!
Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
thank you so much emma! and certainly Frieda would thank you as well ... your read is certainly the.. read morethank you so much emma! and certainly Frieda would thank you as well ... your read is certainly the way to do it ..letting go and enjoying the ride ..i do try to write in some of the classical forms from time to time ..because doing so (i think) improves my experience ... but poems like this one are my (and Frieda's) tendency ... i am so happy you enjoyed reading this ..and remembering our mutual friend
E.
7 Years Ago
ps. and i am so happy you mentioned the video ... we had a bit of a search to fine it :)
7 Years Ago
pss. wouldn't that be something to collab with Lewis or any other of our favorite poets of old .. :).. read morepss. wouldn't that be something to collab with Lewis or any other of our favorite poets of old .. :)))) and
7 Years Ago
YESSSSSSSSSSSSS
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By the way.. i miss my friend, Frieda too, never thought an unseen in the flesh friend could mean so.. read moreBy the way.. i miss my friend, Frieda too, never thought an unseen in the flesh friend could mean so much... Think it's time she returned to us now... she can't hide for much longer.. tis not allowed, tis a crime against poets and wonderful people.
Altogether now... FRIEDAAAAAA, come back, we miss and need you! .
7 Years Ago
FRIEEEEEEEEEDA!! COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE MISS AND NEEED YOU!!!!!!!!!!.. read moreFRIEEEEEEEEEDA!! COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE MISS AND NEEED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7 Years Ago
LaUGHING.. that will either inspire her or... she'll make for the hills. Maybe a whisper would hel.. read moreLaUGHING.. that will either inspire her or... she'll make for the hills. Maybe a whisper would help... ready? .... .. . .. ..... .... ... .. ... ..
Going to leave here now, really must. Will be searching high and low, behind doors and under rugs, t.. read moreGoing to leave here now, really must. Will be searching high and low, behind doors and under rugs, top of mountains, deep in the bluest sea. Fridea has to be somewhere..Did you know that mermaids and unicorns are her best friend> Will go find some and ask the way .. bfn.
7 Years Ago
STILL love this collaboration, brings back the way things were, the influence that special person ha.. read moreSTILL love this collaboration, brings back the way things were, the influence that special person had on thinking, on seeing... and of course, as shown in your combined writing... imagination!
Smile soft but broad in memory of beautiful memories and whisper to the wing... 'Come out, come out, wherever you are.' x.
7 Years Ago
i missed your comment of 2 months ago! hmmm .. computers right!? so glad this brings you such fond m.. read morei missed your comment of 2 months ago! hmmm .. computers right!? so glad this brings you such fond memories ..i know you have given a smile to our good friend ..yeh! mermaids and unicorns ..can't get much better than that ..love and peace emmajoy
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much... still miss my friend with the curled pinky and language that knew, knows, no bo.. read moreThank you so much... still miss my friend with the curled pinky and language that knew, knows, no bounds. Sweet thoughts in life to you, my friend.. :)
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6 Years Ago
yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read moreyes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will return ..the burn must have simply been too much :( but we can keep remembering her can't we ..and her voice and cussing especially ;)
6 Years Ago
STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read moreSTILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanities in Italian - and to be happy in any way that suits the moment. Frieda, wherever you are, come back, there are warriors here to protect you.. believe me.
I don't know how i missed this from you, Emma .. i wish she would come back too .. and read how we a.. read moreI don't know how i missed this from you, Emma .. i wish she would come back too .. and read how we all support her :(
6 Months Ago
Today, 29/08/2023 and still miss Freida. Such a character, a little wicked and absolutely special. .. read moreToday, 29/08/2023 and still miss Freida. Such a character, a little wicked and absolutely special.
Must find a post of yours that I've not reviewed now. :)
6 Months Ago
Em, your comment touches my heart .. yes .. she was just a little wicked and so full of spunk and jo.. read moreEm, your comment touches my heart .. yes .. she was just a little wicked and so full of spunk and joy .. i miss her too. i tried the email that use to connect me but did not hear back .. from my streets, the attention this poem has gotten and continues to get is flabergasting .. and humbling .. she is a corker still i am sure; but it would be so nice if someone could give us an update. love on ya me dear friend
I wasn’t aware that someone was treated in such a way they had to leave - how saddening that is. Love the spacey poem.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
well ... s**t happens as we say eh!? it is a sad and sorry thing .. i miss Ms. Frieda very much .. a.. read morewell ... s**t happens as we say eh!? it is a sad and sorry thing .. i miss Ms. Frieda very much .. as do many .. but hey .. it is what it is .. thanks very very much for reading and leaving your review .. i luv it .. thanks so much
E.
commedia dell'arte
delicious nonsense that makes perfect sense as long as you sit upon a mushroom
I had so much fun reading this, thank you to both of you for the fun "trip"
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
and thank you for reading and reviewing .. we had fun writing it ..
EN enjoyed the ride. Very Lewis Carrollesque, with a delicious bit of depth to reward the reader who pays attention
ken e
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
thank you so much for reviewing ... i am honored and thrilled you enjoyed the ride .. and looked a b.. read morethank you so much for reviewing ... i am honored and thrilled you enjoyed the ride .. and looked a bit deeper .. nothing more can be asked of eh!?
E.
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This reminds me of John Lennon telling a fan who showed up at his house that he wasn’t this guy’s answer, that all he did was play around with words.
There is a lot to say about playing with words-wasn’t it Shakespeare who said the play is the thing?
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
ahahahaha .. i am so happy you took time to read this one sir!! yes ... the stage .. players .. ligh.. read moreahahahaha .. i am so happy you took time to read this one sir!! yes ... the stage .. players .. lights and line ;))))))) thanks so much for going ahead and reading this and for you thoughts
E.
To this refers to how we shouldn't make decisions right after a tragedy. We must wait for the fog of grief to lift.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
thank you for taking time my friend! interesting take on this .. it was all done in fun and neither .. read morethank you for taking time my friend! interesting take on this .. it was all done in fun and neither Frieda nor I expected much attention be given it .. sure miss her .. did you know Frieda, Sir Cowboy?
E.
On first read, this was too much for my not-yet-entirely-awake brain this morning. I read it again. More images appeared. I read two or three pages of reviews and comments. I read it a third time. I watched the video. Wow! This is getting good. I read it a fourth time, much more slowly, stopping at every word. Such a mind-blowing experience to be had from the imagery you and Frieda have woven here! Then, for fun, and in keeping with the idea of the poem, I read it backwards. If you ignore the syntactical anomalies, it is equally as powerful! You and Frieda created an abstract painting of “clouds of words…like rough gouged stones” that can be appreciated from any angle!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
WOW! how you felt this my new found friend...if i may call you that?? :) how so many miss dear Ms. F.. read moreWOW! how you felt this my new found friend...if i may call you that?? :) how so many miss dear Ms. Freida ... i could not be more gratified .. nor have i been in my more than a decade here and a decade beyond ... of non-educated poetry endeavors ...i must and certainly will visit your lanes sir .. right here at the Cafe' .. i can not express my gratitude for your review ... when another creative writer reads .. several times and then again .. is way beyond what one could hope for ... thanks so much for finding this and taking your precious time to review .. see you 'round sir! ... right here at the Cafe' :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.
I have been gone awhile and do not know your friend but if it was the cranky talentless old man hack who thinks he's a bona fide literary critic that lurks around looking for a mark to insult I'm truly sorry.
This read like a mushroom trip and I liked it! Very reminiscent of Lewis Carrol.the imagery is fantastic!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
well ... welcome back! it very well could be the same culprit .. i do not know .. people like that h.. read morewell ... welcome back! it very well could be the same culprit .. i do not know .. people like that have come and gone and thankfully, at least from my street .. it has been quite a while since the last one .. thank you for choosing to read this .. so happy you enjoyed the imagery .. it was great fun to write along with Frieda and many will always miss her .. thanks again so much for reading and commenting .. and for returning .. love and peace!
E.
I took peyote as part of ceremony just a month ago (wow, was that only a month ago?!?), and this of course brought the experience to mind! Wonderfully crafted without losing the playfulness or meaning, fantastic! I don't know your collaborator but still feel their loss, I hate bullies!!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
thank you for your empathy regarding Freida .. miss her a lot around here. so glad you chose to read.. read morethank you for your empathy regarding Freida .. miss her a lot around here. so glad you chose to read this one .. when people do it brings Freida back for a moment .. yes .. in the 60s peyote was one of the drugs of choice .. sounds like quite the story behind your ceremony ... thanks again for taking time .. good to have met says i!
E.
i feel you, jessy .. but don't recognize you .. will have to check your profile ... right now ;) be .. read morei feel you, jessy .. but don't recognize you .. will have to check your profile ... right now ;) be of good cheer ... all things in this world pass away but there is something that is eternal for those who seek it .. love on ya! see ya 'round .. right here at the Cafe' .. thank you for reading and reviewing this poem .. it always reminds me of Freida, whom we all still miss ... peace and joy!
E.
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