"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      


© 2016 Einstein Noodle



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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



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Still dancing to the magic that is E...you started it with that mushroom graphic, you're truly an inspiration my sweet friend. :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

right back at you! my appreciation grows and grows ..
E.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ditto that dear, did I mention I adore the music? ....
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes you did! i am listening to it again right now!
The phrasing and images in this one sure blows my mind!... wow you two!!! what a collab!!! have to admit, think that is the first time I have ever seen "curiouser" used... made me giggle for some reason.... admit I had to look up a word or two in dictionary with this one.. wicked write... wheeew... I know my mind is floating in a fuzzy fog, but this magical carpet ride amongst these word clouds had me trippin for sure!!! HELP!! what a ride!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

the magic is all Frieda ..had to search for some of the words myself ;) one of the things i enjoy ab.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Don't believe the man behind the curtain! Thanks muchly April, glad you enjoyed the trip. :)
Seems that everyone on here as of late has been compelled to take a trip into absurd wonderland. I personally liked the combination of hinterland, with such a trailing of 'tremors'. Oh, and the line "half past daft" also made me smile; you have no idea how many times I go to check my watch and it tells me that I have already past daft. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Absurd wonderland is such a luverly place to visit, don't ya think....thanks, and me too!
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

as for me ??? i think i just might stay here with open windows to create more daft ... ahahahhaa!read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You've been on that mushroom too long E... ;)
You guys know how to create a magical poetry...simply enjoyed the read!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

hi big A. always good to see you! writing with beautiful Frieda is always magical .. thanks again fo.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You cast the spell, I merely followed :) Thanks muchly A.
A. Amos

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friends...
A fanciful journey on the surface, but what I like is the underneath

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

I recognized the Frieda pickle in this the second I saw it. Damn. I miss you!
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

ummm, maybe we could tell her to just leave the troll target on my back and she can get behind me.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes ... i also would take it gladly! ... love ya KL!
That was very creayive work here..i loved this beautiful work..and ypu know i was atteacked to read since i sawmshroom which is food ..hehe..that wasnt expected..well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

mushrooms add a lot to any culinary stew pot :) thank you for getting hooked and partaking in the wh.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Oh and what a stew pot it is, thanks so much stars....
stars are far

3 Years Ago

haha always my pleausre

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