"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      


© 2016 Einstein Noodle



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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

3 Months Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



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It seems the kiddie books have grown up, and are whirling together n a bit of psychedelic mist. So much here to love and to ponder - wink and blink and nod - genius!
Somewhere, Lewis Carroll is smiling...
by the way - I made it to half past daft a long time ago... in a land far, far away...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

:) love your comments .. thanks for taking time
E.
"my shroom head explodes"

with either poetic thoughts that feel like they are on LSD...or

i am just getting curiouser....as to what that "half past daft" feels like...

i'll tell you when i get back.

great job you two.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

so glad you enjoyed our romp! Frieda is a master of inspiration and creativity .. thanks for taking .. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

It's actually quarter to absurdity now jacob, but we'll let you slide, glad you enjoyed the show...
Wowsers...I'm glad I waited till my headache was gone to venture into this rabbit hole...from start to finish, this had - and still has - my head in a swirling swivel of childhood on an acid trip...Mrs.R calls me Dali...I've just been out-Dali'ed...

I'm never sure what I'm gonna get (aside from a phenomenal poem) when I click on a new collab from you two, but I know I wasn't expecting this...chapters of my childhood that I thought were dead in my memory were revived (wink and blink and nod? really?) and I was treated to some of the best wordplay you two have ever concocted...I don't like quoting from collabs though, I think I've mentioned that before haha But you both are well-represented, and this is my favourite one to date...can I buy your magic bus, or at least rent it for a bit?

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i don't think i want to sell ... but climb on board .. we'll all take a trip .. what gracious and en.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha 'out Dali'd' I doubt it, but thanks muchly Benji, jazz'd you enjoy the trip. :)
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Always a pleasure kids :)
frisky frolicsome fantastical (avoids the obvious f word) fluttery romp of a poem this is. there's actually a lot of meat here. It says more than it 'says' in places - mutlilayered madhatterness
calloo callay.
Which one of you ate all the oysters and where is that cat?
Found this one delightful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha you didn't have to say it.... ;) Thanks muchly TL.
TL Boehm

1 Year Ago

I miss Frieda too.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes .... peace and joy to you TL ...you guys were very good friends weren't you!? :( and April is go.. read more
Still dancing to the magic that is E...you started it with that mushroom graphic, you're truly an inspiration my sweet friend. :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

right back at you! my appreciation grows and grows ..
E.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ditto that dear, did I mention I adore the music? ....
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes you did! i am listening to it again right now!
The phrasing and images in this one sure blows my mind!... wow you two!!! what a collab!!! have to admit, think that is the first time I have ever seen "curiouser" used... made me giggle for some reason.... admit I had to look up a word or two in dictionary with this one.. wicked write... wheeew... I know my mind is floating in a fuzzy fog, but this magical carpet ride amongst these word clouds had me trippin for sure!!! HELP!! what a ride!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

the magic is all Frieda ..had to search for some of the words myself ;) one of the things i enjoy ab.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Don't believe the man behind the curtain! Thanks muchly April, glad you enjoyed the trip. :)
Seems that everyone on here as of late has been compelled to take a trip into absurd wonderland. I personally liked the combination of hinterland, with such a trailing of 'tremors'. Oh, and the line "half past daft" also made me smile; you have no idea how many times I go to check my watch and it tells me that I have already past daft. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Absurd wonderland is such a luverly place to visit, don't ya think....thanks, and me too!
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

as for me ??? i think i just might stay here with open windows to create more daft ... ahahahhaa!read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You've been on that mushroom too long E... ;)
You guys know how to create a magical poetry...simply enjoyed the read!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

hi big A. always good to see you! writing with beautiful Frieda is always magical .. thanks again fo.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

You cast the spell, I merely followed :) Thanks muchly A.
A. Amos

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friends...
A fanciful journey on the surface, but what I like is the underneath

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

I recognized the Frieda pickle in this the second I saw it. Damn. I miss you!
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

ummm, maybe we could tell her to just leave the troll target on my back and she can get behind me.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes ... i also would take it gladly! ... love ya KL!

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