"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      


© 2016 Einstein Noodle



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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

8 Months Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



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very nicely done the both of you.


I thank you for your kind review
and comments you left on my page.


Sounds like you were lost in Alice and wonderland
here Einstein Noodle my friend HA...HA don't let
the Queen say Off with his HEAD!


thank you for sharing.

Blessings. Benita


Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

your comments make me laugh .. i will beware of the Queen of Hearts ;) thank you so much
E.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

You're welcome. That was what popped into my head but I know you both need no drugs to write this i.. read more
Ah the adventures in wonderland have never ceased to be an inspiration. This is a very interesting write. It leaves much for the imagination to ponder. Very well penned. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

and thank you for reading.. and your comments... i agree! the wonderland is a rabbit hole of inspira.. read more
in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
alas, we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

Carroll and Starship, I think, would be proud. Bravo.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

i'm humbled now! thank you Pryde .. really appreciate your encouraging support .. glad you had fun r.. read more
I'm going to have to bust out my dictionary! I do not know "scaramouch" :P

I love curiouser and curiouser...this is a prevalent theme in my life!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

that's Frieda! and as i stated below.. my favorite lines in this .. thanks Mr. Alloy .. and so glad .. read more
"Off with the mushroom head". I feel like I just took a stroll with Alice, took a couple of hits with the caterpillar and chased a white rabbit on to Grace Slick's front lawn. This was so very good. It is hard to imagine this was a collabortaion. It reads as one voice, one far out voice, Great job E. and Frieda P.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

honestly .. your remarks cause me to beam with good pride :))) really happy you had a good trip .. G.. read more
Awesome you too. Clever one

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
common sense took a recess,
spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
to my surprise, the scaramouch
of a head talked back

loved this write

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

credit to Frieda with that verse .. the scaramouch line is my favorite ;)
E.
It seems the kiddie books have grown up, and are whirling together n a bit of psychedelic mist. So much here to love and to ponder - wink and blink and nod - genius!
Somewhere, Lewis Carroll is smiling...
by the way - I made it to half past daft a long time ago... in a land far, far away...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

:) love your comments .. thanks for taking time
E.
"my shroom head explodes"

with either poetic thoughts that feel like they are on LSD...or

i am just getting curiouser....as to what that "half past daft" feels like...

i'll tell you when i get back.

great job you two.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

so glad you enjoyed our romp! Frieda is a master of inspiration and creativity .. thanks for taking .. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

It's actually quarter to absurdity now jacob, but we'll let you slide, glad you enjoyed the show...
Wowsers...I'm glad I waited till my headache was gone to venture into this rabbit hole...from start to finish, this had - and still has - my head in a swirling swivel of childhood on an acid trip...Mrs.R calls me Dali...I've just been out-Dali'ed...

I'm never sure what I'm gonna get (aside from a phenomenal poem) when I click on a new collab from you two, but I know I wasn't expecting this...chapters of my childhood that I thought were dead in my memory were revived (wink and blink and nod? really?) and I was treated to some of the best wordplay you two have ever concocted...I don't like quoting from collabs though, I think I've mentioned that before haha But you both are well-represented, and this is my favourite one to date...can I buy your magic bus, or at least rent it for a bit?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

i don't think i want to sell ... but climb on board .. we'll all take a trip .. what gracious and en.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha 'out Dali'd' I doubt it, but thanks muchly Benji, jazz'd you enjoy the trip. :)
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Always a pleasure kids :)

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